Camila Contest....[Cindy]

  • SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA
    17 years ago

    *****RESULTS AT THE BOTTOM*****
    I've decided to make a contest with the titles of the songs from a Mexican rock band called Camila. Since they are in spanish, I'm going to translate the titles for you.

    Titles:

    ~Hug Me~
    -ReproducedByIntelligence (done)
    -SarahDale (done)
    -
    -

    ~You Got My Love~
    -Patience (done)
    -SarahDale (done)
    -
    -

    ~It's Enough~[FULL]
    -HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    (reserved)
    -My Mistakes (done)
    -Samantha Lynn (done)
    -SarahDale (done)

    ~Everything Changed~[FULL]
    -HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG (reserved)
    -xPinkDizzyTeacupx (done)
    -Patiece (done)
    -Polaroid (done)

    ~I Want~[FULL]
    -AblissfulDREAMER (done)
    -Luanne (done)
    -FavoriteForgottonStory (done)
    -Phirion (done)

    ~Everything's The Same~
    -ToWriteLoveOnHerArms (reserved)
    -loveNpain (done)
    -
    -

    ~It Goes For You~
    -FavoriteForgottonStory (done)
    -xRYUZAKIx has a sweet tooth (reserved)
    -rachaelxxblink (done)
    -

    ~Without Your Love~ [FULL]
    -xPinkDizzyTeacupx (done)
    -Luanne (done)
    -DeathsRose (done)
    -Polariod (done)

    ~Losing You All Over Again~
    -HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG (reserved)
    -xPinkDizzyTeacupx (done)
    -Bryan (reserved)
    -

    Now here are the rules:
    1- First come, first serve.
    2- Reserve as many as you want
    3- Doesn't have to rhyme, but you can if you want to.
    4- Any genre and any type of poem.
    5- Every title will have 4 people.
    6- Must be new!
    7- Spelling Counts!!

    *EVERY SPOT HAS TO BE FILLED!*

    ~Due date: Jan. 31.~

    1st Place- 8 r/r/c
    2nd Place- 5 r/r/c

    HAVE FUN!!!

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    17 years ago

    Everything Changed
    Losing you All Over Again
    and
    It`s Enough

    :]

  • Jenni Marie
    17 years ago

    Everything changed, without your love, && losing you all over again, please

  • Blissful
    17 years ago

    Can the title of my poem be a little different from the one you have?
    for example the title you have is
    "I Want"
    Could my poems title be
    "I Want you to Need Me"

  • SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA
    17 years ago

    Sure, just tell me what title is gonna go under.

  • Blissful
    17 years ago

    Alright I want to reserve the title
    "I Want"

  • Blissful
    17 years ago

    I Want You to Need Me
    by AblissfulDREAMER

    I want to be the answer to your every wish
    And to be the pleasure in your dreams
    I want to be the girl on your arm
    The one you would never let go
    Who you can always turn to
    When the dreaded is near
    I want to be the beaming light
    That shines through your eyes
    I want you to need me

    You're everywhere to me
    I deeply care for you
    And all I ask in return
    Is for you to need me too

  • Bryan
    17 years ago

    Loosing You All Over Again please

  • SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA
    17 years ago

    All right, it's updated.

    Keep it up ^_^

  • SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA
    17 years ago

    You reserve a spot on title that interests you. Then you write a poem that has to do with the title you reserve. After that, you post the poem in the board and you wait until the contest is over. Do you still think it's hard?

  • Lu
    17 years ago

    Without Your Love & I Want Plezzzzz

  • Lu
    17 years ago

    Without Your Love

    Tears roll along a beaten path
    hollow heart feels the echo
    drowning in the aftermath
    of broken promises, betrayal

    The sense of unison lost in time
    stranger set before my eyes
    no longer yours, nor you mine
    love returned with bitter silence

    Yearning for felicity and peace
    in this chaotic war of love
    awaiting the shackled pain to release
    from images of a heart untrue

    Stitched together with fraying thread
    when needing you most, left
    heart bleeding upon a burning bed
    without your love, there is no us

    Regret may fill YOUR days soon
    for words spoken, go unheard
    rainy days and cloud covered moon
    will nestle painfully in your heart

    Emptiness needs companionship
    to fill a void of loneliness ....
    once your words, now mine

    ~ What goes around ... comes around baby
    without your love .....

  • Lu
    17 years ago

    ~*~* I Want ~*~*

    I Want ...
    To feel your arms around me
    locked in an everlasting embrace
    smooth loving fingertips
    to gently caress my face

    I Want ...
    Walks beneath the moonlit sky
    to be swept away with romance
    and even when the music ceases
    our hearts to forever dance

    I Want ...
    Our lips to touch with passion
    to feel fire sizzle my skin
    trust me with your secrets and
    your deepest desires within

    I Want ...
    For time to just stop ticking
    as we get lost in each other's eyes
    after the most thunderous arguments
    know a rainbow will fill our skies

    I Want ...
    You to hold our love within your hands
    and trust that you will never let go
    even when silver touches my hair
    still love me from head to toe

    I Want ...
    To know from this day forward
    that you will always be faithful and true
    for if you can not promise this
    good-bye will have to do

    Sounds ...
    Like I want so very much from you
    yet really it's not much at all, my dear
    for it all really boils down to just five words
    "I will love you forever"... the words I long to hear

  • Teria
    17 years ago

    I'll take hug me. (:
    Maybe more afterwards.

  • SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA
    17 years ago

    *UPDATED*

    Keep them coming ^_^

  • Teria
    17 years ago

    Hug me (Let down by the let down)

    Developing within my feeble mind what could but will not be.
    a home on a hill, with pearls about my body and a man to love -
    dreams for the open minded drift within my lifeless brain.
    chanting rhymes of evil schemes to get exactly what I need.

    And, I need him because I love him not the opposite;
    he's my cherished memories that still linger deep inside.
    He's my living sacrifice - exactly what I'd die for.
    He's my everything but God, the only one I love.

    I can't hold back my fantasized thoughts though they ruin me,
    I can't grasp reality for what it is, instead I betray myself.
    And, I can't seem to find a reason to not trust him -
    though there surely are a thousand and one of them.

    Increasing lines across my forehead and veins pop out from my neck,
    my elbows burn, my knees are weak, and my eyes turning red.
    The tears are coming - gushing out like a violently whispered lullaby.
    And, all I ask from him is a hug to keep my dreams alive . . .

    but, I'm let down by the let down yet another time.

  • never let go of the falling angels
    17 years ago

    Reserve you got my love please

  • LilMissLN
    17 years ago

    "I want"
    and
    "it goes for you"
    please

  • LilMissLN
    17 years ago

    I want

    I want this world to be a dream
    I wish you can see how I feel
    It's not what it may seem
    You think its small buts it's a big deal

    I want you to know
    I want you
    But im to shy to show
    My fellings that are new

    I want my love to be real
    Something known by few
    I wish you can feel
    How much I love you

    It goes for you

    When my heart beats it beats for you
    When I wake wake up it's next to you
    When I cry happy im happy for you
    When I cry sad I'm missing you
    When I love it's all for you
    When I speak its about you
    When I cant breath im thinking of you
    So baby cant you see drive goes for you

  • DeathsRose
    17 years ago

    I want: Without Your Love

  • DeathsRose
    17 years ago

    Without Your Love

    If one day you stopped loving me
    There would be nothing I could do

    Without your love I am nothing
    Slowly fading away

    What would life be without your love
    Just an empty shell of what it used to be

    What would I be without your love
    Just an empty shell of the girl you used to know

    Without your love there would be no reason for me to smile
    No reason for me to go on
    Except the hope of you loving me again
    Making me live again
    Making me feel the way you used to

  • SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA
    17 years ago

    ^PM me titles you're gonna get.

  • SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA
    17 years ago

    UPDATED =]

  • SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA
    17 years ago

    All right, that's fine.

    ^_^

  • My Mistakes
    17 years ago

    I want to reserve a sopt under it's enough

  • My Mistakes
    17 years ago

    It's enough that you love me
    I don't need you to tell me
    it's enough that you want me
    you don't have to prove it
    it's enough that I have you
    I don't need any more
    it's enough to know your mine
    I don't care what you do
    it's enough to know I'm special
    I don't need any gifts
    It's enough that you love me
    you don't need to tell me

  • Patience
    16 years ago

    Hello- Could I reserve a spot under:

    Everything Changed and You Got My Love

    Thank you,

  • SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA
    16 years ago

    Deadline set for Jan. 31.

    *****************EDIT********************

    Deadline has been moved to Feb. 14.

  • Tammie
    16 years ago

    I'll reserve 'Losing You All Over Again' please.

    Thank youu.

  • Jenni Marie
    16 years ago

    Losing You All Over Again

    Do you think I don't see your eyes light up
    Every single time that she's anyway near?
    Holding my hand tightly yet staring at her
    Do you even notice my lonely falling tears?

    Know you'd never intentionally hurt me
    You're to noble to go behind my back
    Yet my heart is still breaking into two
    Knowing everything you want, I lack

    Really, understand I should let you go
    But I guess I'm just a little to selfish
    Can't find it in my heart to say goodbye
    For it is your comfort that I'll miss

    So I'll keep holding onto this wasted love
    Even though it's causing me so much pain
    Knowing you're silently loving her from afar
    Resigned to knowledge I'm losing you again

  • Jenni Marie
    16 years ago

    Everything Changed

    Do you remember how good we used to be together?
    When we would never take each other for granted
    Those days that were spent in each other's arms
    And each constantly left the other enchanted?

    Or when every day was filled with tender kisses
    Instead of lashing out with destroying hurtful words
    When we each brought a smile to the other's face
    And we felt only love, never shame disgust and hurt?

    Do you recall those days that have long passed by
    When our world's weren't in disarray and askew
    When we trusted in each other so implicitly
    And we knew that my heart belonged to you?

    Recalling when we used to call each other on the phone
    For no other reason than just to say love you and hi
    Always pleasantly surprising the other every day
    Now the sound of your voice makes me want to cry

    When we used to lie tangled up together in bed
    Staring at each other with only love in our eyes
    Only now it seems there's just anger and hatred left
    Don't know how to deal with all the alibi's and lies

    Now I'm constantly wishing to go back to the past
    Wondering why things couldn't have stayed the same
    When this relationship was beautiful, precious to us both
    Our love used to mean everything, now it's all changed

  • Jenni Marie
    16 years ago

    Without Your Love (Trijan Refrain)

    You've just left me here all alone
    Just left and walked away
    Spending every day by the phone
    Hoping you'll call today
    Why'd you leave me with all these tears
    Once happy, now just left with fears
    Why'd you'd leave me
    Why'd you'd leave me
    Don't you care about falling tears?

    You've just left me here alone
    Always wondering why
    Pitiful thoughts constantly roam
    Nothing to do but cry
    Come back to me, don't stay away
    I'm tired of these lonely days
    Come back to me
    Come back to me
    It's with you that I want to stay

    You've just left me here alone
    Can only think of you
    Seems my heart's no longer your home
    Not knowing what to do
    Without your love I'm just a mess
    Missing your embrace, I confess
    Without your love
    Without your love
    Beg you, don't leave me in this mess

    The Trijan Refrain, created by Jan Turner, consists of three 9-line stanzas, for a total of 27 lines.
    Line 1 is the same in all three stanzas, although a variation of the form is not to repeat the same line
    at the beginning of each stanza. In other words, the beginning line of each stanza can be different.
    The first four syllables of line 5 in each stanza are repeated as the double-refrain for lines 7 and 8.
    The Trijan Refrain is a rhyming poem with a set meter and rhyme scheme as follows:

    Rhyme scheme: a/b/a/b/c/c/d,d refrain of first 4 words of line five /c

    Meter: 8/6/8/6/8/8/4,4 refrain/8

  • Samantha lynn
    16 years ago

    "it's enough"
    please.

  • Kenny
    16 years ago

    I'll reserve "It's Enough" then "Hug Me" please

  • Kenny
    16 years ago

    Oh also "You Got My Love" thanks

  • Kenny
    16 years ago

    Can I ask?

    When will be the due date/deadline??

  • SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA
    16 years ago

    The due date is on Jan. 31.

    BTW. It's updated. =]

  • Kenny
    16 years ago

    Okay! thanks! ^^,

  • Kenny
    16 years ago

    TITLE: Hug Me
    BY: SarahDale

    When I'm hurt
    and low,
    When there is
    only darkness
    and not
    much glow
    When the pain
    hugs me and
    doesn't let
    me go.
    When the tears
    which loves me,
    Can't bear to
    see me in pain
    and starts
    to flow.
    Life gives me
    blow after blow.
    I'm beaten,
    But not defeated.
    I need a hug
    To feel I'm
    not alone,
    and someone's
    heart beat
    with mine,
    I need this
    to assure that
    things will be fine.

  • Samantha lynn
    16 years ago

    It's Enough

    You
    call me
    beautiful.
    and it's enough to make me
    feel I am prefect with my flaws.

    You
    hold me
    and it's enough to make me
    feel forever safe and secure.

    You
    make me
    smile
    and it's enough to make me
    daydream about your hands on me.

    You
    tell me
    you love me.
    and it's enough to make me
    feel life is worth living.

    You
    just you
    It's enough to make me
    never want to be without you.