Contest...

  • IfIhide11
    17 years ago

    Okay. This contest is nothing super special. All you have to do is submit a poem that follows the titles listed below. All titles are titles of songs.

    1. To be loved
    2. Forever(taken)
    3. Lie To me(taken)
    4. Stronger
    5. Collide
    6. Kiss
    7. So Hott
    8. Sorry
    9. In The End
    10. Pain(taken)
    11. The River(taken)
    12. One
    13. Angel(taken)
    14. When I'm Gone
    15. S.O.S.

    *put the title at the top of your poem.

    *Awards*
    1st--10 poem/quote comments
    2nd--7 poem/quote comments
    3rd--5 poem/quote comments

    & all three winners are added to my favorites.
    ______________________________________
    Depending how much interest is in the contest, i might have to cut it short.

    ~~Deadline: Jan 1~~

  • SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA
    17 years ago

    I want "Angel" please.

  • Vincent Thornsberry
    17 years ago

    I want pain please

  • Beautiful Chaos
    17 years ago

    Lie To Me please

  • Wings Of Flames
    17 years ago

    Forever :)

  • dollwithafrown
    17 years ago

    "The River" please. :]

  • dollwithafrown
    17 years ago

    The River
    by SecludedSerendipity

    We used to go down to Daddy's cabin every winter,
    My brother and I, that is.
    The two men would sit in front of the log fire,
    Embracing the burning heat.

    I'd shoot my father a smile while he hugged me,
    "Be back by dinner time,"
    He'd say, five seconds after my arrival.
    He knew where I was going.

    I sat on the arced wooden bridge,
    Listening to the sounds
    Of which had become my favourite tune;
    Tiny waves rippling the water.

    I thought myself a mermaid,
    Wishing this river my home.
    Whenever I dipped in a finger, the cold stung my hand,
    Yet I find warmth just sitting at its side.

    The tame river was just that: tame, quiet,
    Yet reminded me of the ocean:
    A ferocious beast that nobody could escape from,
    But I never felt scared.

    The river was my protection, from what I can't say;
    The genuine love of a young girl's life.
    So every year we'd travel to that cabin,
    But it wasn't the log fire that kept me coming back.

  • Gem
    17 years ago

    When I'm Gone please

  • DeathsRose
    17 years ago

    Sorry, please

  • DeathsRose
    17 years ago

    Sorry

    Sorry I wasn't the perfect daughter
    Well not perfect enough for you

    Sorry I couldn't be pretty
    Well not pretty enough for him

    Sorry it had to end like this
    The pain was too much to bare

  • Beautiful Chaos
    17 years ago

    Lie To Me

    Don't tell me it's over,
    My heart can't break again,
    There's nothing left,
    You're killing me.

    Whisper sweet nothings in my ear,
    Empty words,
    Hollow gestures,
    I have loved into blindness.

    I drank your seduction like fine wine,
    Basking in it,
    Savouring it,
    I am no connoisseur.

    I consumed poison,
    Smiling as it crept through my veins,
    But I was happier,
    So much happier before I knew.

    Now,
    Even my dreams quiver,
    Waiting to fall apart,
    Vanishing into the void.

    Deceive my senses,
    Tell me what I feel isn't real,
    Lie to me,
    It should come so easily.

  • SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA
    17 years ago

    --Angel--

    You went away
    And took my heart...
    Only God and you know
    How much I love you...

    You are in my mind at every thought
    You are in my heart at every beat...
    You are in my soul at every breath
    You are in my eyes at every delusion...

    ..... "I yearn for your beautiful smile" .....

    My heat breaks with your memory
    My eyes cry with your though...
    My mind is tormented with fault
    My soul is lonely without you...

    ..... "I yearn for your gentle kiss" .....

    My present days are filled with pain
    In my heart from missing you...
    My present days are filled with tired eyes
    From a desire to see your face once again...

    My present days are filled with imagination
    Exhausted from the thought of us
    Being together once again...

    My present days are filled with a soul
    That feels like giving up...
    Because it feels so lonely
    And lost without you...

    ..... "I yearn for your comforting hug" .....

    And as the days pass by
    And I don't get to see your smile...
    My heart continues to slowly break
    My mind continues with thoughts of fault and torment...

    My eyes continue tired and blind
    To the search for your smile here on earth...
    And my soul continues to fade
    Softly day by day...

    Because without you, there is nothing for me...

    ...."I yearn for you, Anthony"....

    Until we meet again,
    You'll live in my heart!
    I'll love you you forever,
    My fallen angel!

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    DEDICATED TO MY ONE AND ONLY LOVE: ANTHONY ALVAREZ TE AMO! I MISS YOU SO MUCH TONY!

    *Cindy Lopez*
    *Dec. 24, 2007*

  • NyellMoonlight
    17 years ago

    Collide, please :)

  • Ashes of a Black Rose aka Night Child
    17 years ago

    I'll take "In The End."