Multiple Chance Contest

Good Riddance (Triolet)

Finally know what you are, time to let go
I'm about to wash my hnds of you
Don't try come back through this door
Finally know what you are, time to let go
Know I can do better, now I want more
Hating you for all you put me through
Finally know what you are, time to let go
I'm about to wash my hands of you

Triolet-Consists of 8 lines.
The 1st, 4th and 7th line repeat.
The 2nd and 8th line repeat as well.
Rhyme scheme is abaaabab

Your Wall

It's there again, that damned wall
Built it up so that I can't get in
You're going to have to trust one day
Can't keep everything bottled within

It's there again, that damned wall
Baby, wont you let me pull it down?
Your eyes are screaming for release
Though you're not making a sound

It's there again, that damned wall
I'm aware you've been hurt in the past
But don't you realize you can trust me?
You're secrets just can't always last

It's there again, that damned wall
Can't you see it's adding to the misery?
Sweetheart, just let it fall to the ground
Realize that you can always trust me

Are you extending it or no? Cuz life hasn't been too cooperative, so I've been caught up in a lot of stuff...

I'll try writing one when I can...

-Apologies, Kitty

Title: Lost
Written by: xoOrdinaryGirlox

She can't eat, she can't sleep
She can't think, she's in so deep
Baby you occupy her mind
With your words so kind

She's becoming lost in your game
She always thought it was a bit lame
Now she's caught by you
But she cant fight through

Every minute, every hour
You have that special power
No matter how hard she tries
You draw her in with your eyes

To her this game is unknown
In the deep end she got thrown
She's become quite scared
But you seemed like you really cared

To end her confusion about this game
You gave it a very simple name
She took a step side ways
Started walking but looked back and said "Okay"

Alright every body judgement day is on its way. I will start judging on on february 29. thank you all for your participation.

Stupid pup

by Silhouette fairy

Alone in her room she sits,
silent and still.
Confused and not knowing what to do.
She looks at him, eyes glazed over,
flesh ripped from him abdomen.
The hand gives a twitch,
she jumps back,
though knows nothing will happen.
Relaxing she settles again
and gives out a howl of sorrow.
Knowing what she's done
dangering her family,
she doesn't know what had happened
but she now knows she's in trouble.
Finally the family is here,
not in human form.
No, her punishment would be too easy.
They all cry "You stupid pup. How could you?"
She thought she loved him
and that nothing would happen,
but now is her judgment time.
Walking out of the house
to face the pack
she hopes they can forgive her,
but at the same time she knows they shouldn't.
She breaks down crying,
begging for forgiveness.
They turn on her,
lunging from every side.
She surrenders letting them take her
and slowly bit by bit they tear her apart.
Protecting their pack,
riding themselves of the stupid pup.

If allowed, I would like to reserve:

Wretched
Run Free
The Choice

Thanks! ^.^ <3<3<3

Youself and the choice please, i'll get them done as soon as possible, thanks
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YOURSELF

The fickled mind,
a box of gold,
filled to the brim,
with thoughts and secrets.

Never is the mind empty,
never is it unmoving.
We always wish to unhinge it,
But see, that will never occur.

Our minds ruin us,
help us through.
They can be our best friends.
But they can also lead us askew.

They give us the art,
of hesitation and second thoughts.
They give us the chance,
for friendship and love.

They tinge us with jealousy,
over-exaggerations and revenge.
But most of all of curiosity,
the wonder to know more.

To look into others minds,
to see what they see.
They make us look,
Behind locked doors.

They give us the thrill,
of quest and adventure
and the sense of accomplishment,
upon completion

They make us question,
lead us to new discoveries.
To new things, new ideas,
new trains of thought.

Don't always trust them,
For they can lead you astray
the facts aren't all there are,
look to faith, occasionally, for guidance.

For the mind is fickled, imploring.
And from time to time we must,
look to, and trust our inner selves,
Ourselves, our souls.

The Choice
( I know its short but whos never heard of short and sweet :P)

As long as this world is filled with the sun.
As long as an apology will end all done.
As long as love always ends too soon
As long as the moon gives us a soft light in the gloom.

For as long as I love you, for as long as that and more.
You'll always stay dear to me, to my soul
And for as long as a smile is on your face.
I will stay true, with all the power of time and space.

But always remember these kinds words this clue.
Ones that I've spoken, that you always knew.
The small little phrase, I will not be upset.
The truth that you'll always have a choice.

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by the way I love the titles you chose, good luck everyone!

Run Free

All I want to do is run free
I don't want to stay in and hide
you're holding on to me too tight
and I'm screaming on the inside

I don't like being tied to one place
All I want to do is run free
I don't feel safe with you anymore
You've never really understood me

You can't keep me forever
I'm no longer just a child
All I want to do is run free
just to let myself go wild

I won't let you hold me back
You've never tried to see
there's only one thing you need to know
~All I want to do is run free~

Alright this contest is closed for judging. plaese allow some time for me to post the winners.

Hey everybody, i'm sorry for the delay, My father was murdered. so everything has been up in the air and i havent had much time for anything. sorry. I will try to have results by april, pm me for updates.