Jenni's Contest!

  • Jenni Marie
    17 years ago

    1: The morning after the night before. (FULL)
    -Reserved-mOnStRiToS pRiNcEsS
    -Reserved-HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    -Reserved-Emma

    2: How can i be mad at you when i'm the one to blame. (FULL)
    - Reserved-Britt
    -Reserved-Emma
    -Reserved- SlaveToTheMusic

    3: Shame on you, i don't wanna play your games.
    - Reserved-Britt
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    4: There's a mountain between us. (FULL)
    -Done-NyellMoonlight
    -Reserved- AblissfulDREAMER
    -Done-Sole

    5: In the morning they'll take you away from me. (FULL)
    -Done-NyellMoonlight
    -Done- I R Jordannn
    - Reserved- SlaveToTheMusic

    6: Don't let this kiss be our last.
    -Done-mOnStRiToS pRiNcEsS
    -Done-Lemma
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    7: I make mistakes that you don't know about.
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    8: I will be crying when i'm lonely.
    -Done-NyellMoonlight
    -Reserved-HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
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    9: I'm sorry that i didn't try hard enough.
    -Done-Lemma
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    10: All i want is a piece of heaven.
    -Reserved-ReproducedByIntelligence
    -Done-Sole
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    11: Our love has become so demanding.
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    12: Love is like a butterfly.
    -Done- AblissfulDREAMER
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    13: She/he thinks i still care.
    -Done-Lemma
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    14: I want you, i need you, i love you.
    -Done- AblissfulDREAMER
    -Done-LiisaMariie143
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    15: Oh lonesome me.
    -Reserved-HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
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    16: Tears in heaven.
    -Done-Phirion
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    17: Love's not a competition (But i'm winning)
    - Reserved-Britt
    -Done- I R Jordannn
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    18: Angels and airwaves.
    -Reserved- I R Jordannn
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    19: Anger screams my name. (FULL)
    -Done-mOnStRiToS pRiNcEsS
    -Reserved-ReproducedByIntelligence
    -Done-Sole

    20: I'm taking back the key to my heart.
    - Reserved-Gem
    - Reserved-ReproducedByIntelligence
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    ~RULES~

    3 titles per poet.
    3 poets per title.
    NEW .
    No self harm or suicide.
    Rhyme is optional.
    If using formed poetry explain the form.

    DEADLINE: 10th Feb 2008

    Prizes to be decided depending on number of entrants.

  • NyellMoonlight
    17 years ago

    In the morning they'll take you away from me.
    i will be crying when i'm lonely.
    There's a mountain between us.

    Thanks!

  • Blissful
    17 years ago

    4: There's a mountain between us.
    12: love is like a butterfly.
    14: i want you, i need you, i love you.

    thank you :]

  • SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA
    17 years ago

    I want to reserve:

    "The morning after the night before",
    "Anger screams my name", &
    "Don't let this kiss be our last"

    Please.

    Thanks!

    *Cindy*

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    17 years ago

    8: i will be crying when i'm lonely.
    15: oh lonesome me.
    1: the morning after the night before.

    please and thanks :]

  • Blissful
    16 years ago

    I Want You, I Need You, I Love You.
    by AblissfulDREAMER

    I innocently spot you in the distance
    Happily laughing with a couple friends
    Your alluring and flirty smile beaming
    It quickly captures my eyes and loving heart
    Your tempting charm consumes me
    I want you.

    Your appealing face haunts my dreams
    A lonely heart left without your love
    Yearning for the sound of your voice
    To remain in your delightful presence
    My hopeful spirit calling out for you
    I need you.

    Open up your sweet beautiful eyes
    Clear your mind and look into my heart
    My love for you sings proudly
    Take some time to listen to its echo
    The truth plain on my lips as I whisper
    I love you.

  • Gem
    16 years ago

    I'm taking back the key to my heart please

  • NyellMoonlight
    16 years ago

    There's a Mountain Between Us

    Scarlet sensation and shadowed passion
    torture senses for rights and wrongs,
    bitter vindication within consolation
    built up these mute cravings;

    Perfection within your complexion
    turned around my bleak direction,
    within one drip of bloody words
    waving connection to affection,
    admiration to your reflection.

    Persuade my feverish absurdity
    in intricate fractures
    of manufactures
    inside the heart of wretched failure.

    I used to live within inky refraction of your grin
    disguising rhymes of hypnotizing climes
    that changed between infra-red discussions,
    ...used to play with thoughts on delay,
    with abstract clay notes that painfully replay.

    There's a mountain between us, obstacle foreseen...
    I can't lean on emotions too serene;
    temptation daze the mind trapped in a maze,
    crashing the whole world in front of azure gaze.

  • SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA
    16 years ago

    The Morning After The Night Before

    This pain in my heart is hurting,
    Even more than the night before.
    Everything in this world doesn't matter anymore,
    Since you started hurting me like this.

    You've left these scratches on my face,
    And buises all over my body.
    Once again you've made me yours,
    Even if I didn't wanted it this way.

    After you finish with your daily routine,
    You beg me not to say a thing.
    You don't want me to ruin your perfect life,
    But you haven't noticed that you've ruined mine.

    Every single night for the past months,
    You come in my room to take my childhood away.
    Do you not care about me anymore?
    Or are you just another selfless human?

    I used to call you my favorite cousin,
    But now I cannot stand you.
    You have hurt me so many times now,
    Will you please just leave me alone?

    .:CiNdY LoPeZ:.
    .:Jan. 10, 2008:.

  • SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA
    16 years ago

    Anger Screams My Name

    Everytime I see your face,
    Makes me want to beat you.
    You're trying to take my life,
    Just because of your jealousy.

    You think that I don't notice,
    All the things your trying to do.
    But just to give you a head's up,
    You're not going to brake my family.

    It's breaking my heart,
    With all the wrong things you're doing.
    Haven't you become to realize,
    That you're trying to break us apart?

    He doesn't see what you're trying to do,
    But I know perfectly what you're doing.
    When you start flirting with him,
    Anger screams out my name.

    .:CiNdY LoPeZ:.
    .:Jan. 10, 2008:.

  • SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA
    16 years ago

    Don't Let This Kiss Be Our Last

    Every morning when I wake up,
    I see you sleeping by my side.
    Everytime I wake up,
    I fear that you're not by my side.

    You've made me so happy these days,
    And I know you feel just right.
    But these past couple of days,
    Just don't feel so right.

    Everyday when you leave to work,
    I fear of you not coming back.
    Keeping this relationship good is a lot of work,
    I don't ever want to go back.

    Everyday you before you leave,
    You give me a kiss I wish would last.
    But work is waiting and you have to leave,
    So please, don't let this kiss be our last.

    .:CiNdY LoPeZ:.
    .:Jan, 10, 2008:.

  • Melpomene
    16 years ago

    Ohhh, Love these titles. Grr. So hard to choose. For now I'll take:

    In the morning they'll take you away from me.
    &
    How can I be mad at you when i'm the one to blame.

    Thanks barbie!

  • Teria
    16 years ago

    I'm Taking Back The Key To My Heart.
    Anger Screams My Name.
    AND
    All I want is a piece of heaven.

    Great titles.
    xD

  • Sole
    16 years ago

    Please, if possible:

    4: There's A Mountain Between Us
    10: All I Want Is A Piece Of Heaven
    19: Anger Screams My Name

    And do you want all in one post or three different posts? x

  • Sole
    16 years ago

    There's A Mountain Between Us

    A pact, a promise, you swore as I cried
    Kissed me on the cheek, and said your goodbyes
    I buttoned your shirt, you held me tight
    Bitter departure, a rose's thorn in my side

    Called out to war, to battle with the foe
    A young man leaves another young widow
    Lost in confusion, I longed to know
    How and where you were, when, at last, would you be home?

    By the letterbox, I waited in thought
    Head spinning and sad, crying while you fought
    Helplessly old memories I sought
    Two letters from you, my final, patient reward.

    Both in your handwriting, glee tore straight through
    All my supressed fear, I was fine, she was too
    I tore apart the first to read the word from you
    'Missing you both dearly, I'll be home soon it's true.'

    The second letter, I didn't want to fray
    Another from you, happiness I pray
    'My sweetheart, my love, I must carefully say
    if this letter is yours, I've quietly passed away.'

    This can't be true, you're not God's, you are mine
    I tore through the house, in anger sublime
    You broke a promise, but soon we'll be fine
    There's a mountain between us, but I'm learning to climb.

    Sole.

  • Sole
    16 years ago

    All I Want Is A Piece f Heaven

    I tried so hard to be at your side
    Consoling your innocence as in my arms, you cried
    True friendship I thought, my respect ran deep
    'Til I was entangled in lies and deceit.

    I enhanced your smile, changed your frown
    Advised you in hardship, never let you down
    But as we grew closer, I began to feel shame
    I was not your friend, just a pawn in your game

    All I want is my own piece of heaven
    A space in time to swallow me whole
    All I want is a friend who'll listen
    But the Devil owns my sordid soul.

    Sole.

  • Blissful
    16 years ago

    There is a Mountain Between Us
    by AblissfulDREAMER

    That faithful night, etched in my memory ...

    Sultry music playing softly in the background
    Lights dimmed to mysteriously soothing vibe
    Wrapped in the arms of my everlasting love
    Affectionately gazing into his welcoming eyes
    Every slight motion fills me with passion; desire

    Mesmerized while floating on a weightless cloud
    Everyone else is a slight, forgotten reminiscence
    Him && I, lost and consumed in our romantic love
    While he holds me effortlessly deep within him
    Every now and then tenderly whispering in my ear
    "You are my one and only; I will never let you"

    Once loving words which filled me with glee
    Now hold no meaning; left vacant and empty
    Your love now violently torn away from me
    Those warm emotions now faded and ignored

    We once felt as if nothing could destroy our love
    Now there is an imposing mountain between us
    My energy is drained; I can no longer climb

  • Sole
    16 years ago

    Anger Screams My Name

    Intense eyes stalk me from across the street
    I see you watching, calculating fear
    Heavy breathing, careful not to meet
    The eyes of the dragon who sold me here

    Regretting the day I opened your door
    Innocence fled from the moment we met
    You took me in, deluding me more
    Insanity has not broken me yet

    Shattering dreams, a betrayal of trust
    Fearful stare, I'm converted to hate
    My story began with childish lust
    You twisted and warped it, ending with rape.

    Intense eyes stalk me, the dragon's to blame
    I raise your final sight, as anger screams my name.

    Sole.

  • Blissful
    16 years ago

    Love is like a Butterfly
    by AblissfulDREAMER

    Hopeful young girls urgently seeking affection
    From those who promise a protected forever
    Searching for the love which makes them weak
    An emotion many talk about but few truly feel

    Dopey smiles erupt on optimistic lips
    When thoughts of him quietly arouse
    Wobbly knees turn to mushy jello
    When his eyes connect with mine
    Butterflies explode in tight tummies
    Signifying intense and true passions

    Young girls make the silly slip-up
    Of chasing this sought-after emotion

    Beautiful love is like a dazzling butterfly
    Delicately fragile and always treasured
    Frantically chase it; unsurprisingly it flees
    But patiently wait while keeping hope alive
    && it will naturally enter your yearning heart
    While completing your most mysterious of dreams

  • NyellMoonlight
    16 years ago

    I will be crying when I am lonely

    Instantly frozen tears stain forgotten pureness
    changing perceptions within passionate heart
    as the thoughts bleed between fingertips,
    closer to the sky- the wings fade through freefall.
    I changed my mind, choked bitter emotions,
    [don't need feverish temptations of your presence]
    - I will be crying when I am lonely.

    Shivering words crawl down the spine, murmuring,
    as fragrant orbits of the planets melt through the clouds,
    painting pictures with my tarnished, undefined senses.
    Delusions perish as failures form haunting choirs.
    I made my way between rows of nothingness
    [played by the rules that lack consolation]
    - I will be crying when I am lonely.

  • NyellMoonlight
    16 years ago

    In the morning they'll take you away from me

    Would you miss the notes crawling under the brink
    or traces of my evident acridness smudged over scattered pages?
    Would you miss colorful smears, whispers over staircases?
    Would you miss... would you miss me?
    Guided by sunlit imagination, I... I surrender.

    Words drip down the throat, causing pain, unsaid...
    Words spill over pages, causing pain, sketched...

    Would you miss my ignorance and hidden smiles?
    Have you ever, ever wondered where my blackened thoughts
    go to rest? -Under the palms of your tired hands, maybe-
    Have you ever, ever wondered why I haven't ever followed
    the notions that tailored obscurity dictated- because, because of you-
    Guided by moonlit mystification, I'll... I'll have to walk away.

  • Sandra D
    16 years ago

    9: I'm sorry that i didn't try hard enough.

    please and thank you :]
    i kno the deadline's tomorrow, ill try to get it in later tonight

  • Jenni Marie
    16 years ago

    Hahaha. I will at the moment because I'm so busy >.< I'll extend until the 28th. :) x x

  • Lemma
    16 years ago

    Hey, glad you extended, means I can enter =)

    Can I get...

    He thinks I still care
    I'm sorry that I didn't try hard enough
    Don't let this kiss be our last

    Thanks =)

    Em xXx

  • Lemma
    16 years ago

    He thinks I still care

    I think he thinks I still love him,
    If he does he'll have to stop and think.
    I never really loved him in the first place,
    Our hearts were never truly in sync.

    Hearing his voice on the phone again,
    Made me realise I'd done the right thing.
    He never treated me with care or respect,
    Or brought me the joy love should bring.

    He hurt me one time too many,
    And he laughed when he made me cry.
    He made my self-confidence wither,
    And every word he spoke was a lie.

    It took me so long to trust again,
    For the wounds that he left to repair.
    I can't understand why he called me,
    He obviously thinks I still care.

  • Lemma
    16 years ago

    Don't let this kiss be our last

    I never want to lose you,
    Never want to let you go,
    I can't face this life without you,
    Because I love you so.
    I know our circumstances,
    Aren't just or fair or right,
    And I can't help but cry myself to sleep,
    When I lay in bed at night.
    But I know that somewhere out there,
    You're thinking of me as well,
    And I know that you are hurting,
    And you feel like you're in hell.
    But we still love each other,
    And I'm always swept away,
    That you could love me even now,
    It means more than I can say.
    So for now we'll say goodbye,
    Don't look so downcast.
    Everything will be alright,
    This kiss won't be our last.

  • Lemma
    16 years ago

    I'm sorry that I didn't try hard enough

    I'm sorry that I didn't listen enough
    You were right, I should have made my voice heard.

    I'm sorry that I didn't fight strong enough
    And that my final judgement was blurred.

    I'm sorry that I didn't stand firm enough
    It was my decision that I should have made.

    I'm sorry that I'm no longer there with you
    I honestly wish that I'd stayed.

    I'm sorry that though I apologise,
    It makes no difference to you still.

    I'm sorry that I didn't try hard enough
    But from now on and forever, I will.

  • Jenni Marie
    16 years ago

    I have been away, I apologize for the delay.

    I will begin judging within the next few days.
    xx

  • Jenni Marie
    16 years ago

    Lord, woman. okay. i'll extend again til the beginning of next week. people blame Britt for the wait. Lmao

  • LiisaMariie143
    16 years ago

    I want you, i need you, i love you. plzz

  • LiisaMariie143
    16 years ago

    I want you, i need you, i love you.
    without you i cant get through.
    you help me get through those crazy days.
    without you it would be a maze.

    I want you, i need you, i love you.
    yes babe, our love is true.
    you have taught me things i have never known.
    you tell me you love me in a very sweet tone.

    I want you, i need you, i love you.
    & I know you want me, need me, and love me too.

  • courtney
    16 years ago

    Our love has become so demanding.please