Contest of Forms

  • Rachel RTVW
    16 years ago

    Let's have a contest. I have chosen some poetry forms that I have not seen on our site or rarely seen. Pick 1 or 2 forms and have a stab at it. Here they are:

    Clerihew
    A Clerihew is a comic verse consisting of two couplets and a specific rhyming scheme,
    aabb invented by Edmund Clerihew Bentley (1875-1956) at the age of 16. The poem
    is about/deals with a person/character within the first rhyme. In most cases, the first
    line names a person, and the second line ends with something that rhymes with the name
    of the person.

    One of the most remembered Clerihew from Bentley's collection is:

    Sir Humphrey Davy
    Abominated gravy.
    He lived in the odium
    Of having discovered sodium.

    Example #2
    Garfield the cat
    On his rear he sat.
    Eating lasagna galore
    All about the decor.

    Copyright © 2000 James & Marie Summers <mailto:marie@shadowpoetry.com>

    Example #3
    The Road Runner
    always almost a goner;
    when attacked in manner dread,
    Wile E. suffers intended fate instead ....

    Copyright © 2004 Alan McAlpine Douglas <mailto:alanmdouglas@lineone.net>

    Epigram
    Epigrams are short satirical poems ending with either a humorous retort or a stinging punchline.

    Used mainly as expressions of social criticism or political satire, the most common forms are
    written as a couplet: a pair of rhymed lines in the same meter.

    Practioners of this poetic expression include John Dunne, Ben Jonson, William Blake and
    Robert Frost.

    Example:
    Bent and battered, the live oaks have through ages survived
    until developed senses of modern man ripped them up still alive.

    Time rolls out down wide grassy lawns
    yet within these suburbs a dearth of it is spawned.

    Such volunteers are said to advocate
    but to the law, they instead frustrate.

    Copyright © 2001 Lachlan Ivy

    Monody
    A monody is a poem in which one person laments another's death, as in Tennyson's
    Break, Break, Break, or Wordsworth's She Dwelt Among the Untrodden Ways.
    (Also see Dirge, Elegy, Epitaph)

    Example:
    The Sea's Handmaiden

    She often walked along the shore
    In windy weather or in fair,
    But now my love shall stroll no more,
    Nor will the breeze play with her hair.

    I did not even know her name
    When she came to me that summer day.
    A wild thing that I could never tame,
    But all the same, I thought she'd stay.

    I've lost her, my love, to the sea
    Her footsteps fading in the sand.
    If only the waves would return her to me,
    So we might stroll hand in hand.

    Copyright © 2001 Dendrobia

    Rondeau
    A Rondeau is a French form, 15 lines long, consisting of three stanzas: a quintet, a quatrain, and a
    sestet with a rhyme scheme as follows: aabba aabR aabbaR. Lines 9 and 15 are short - a
    refrain (R) consisting of a phrase taken from line one. The other lines are longer (but all of the
    same metrical length).

    Example #1:
    Springtime Air

    Come follow me, I'll lead you where
    The days are fine and nights are fair;
    Where fields of clover, lush and green,
    Will visit you within this scene --
    As March inhales the springtime air.

    So come with me and we shall share
    The freshness springtime can ensnare,
    As fields of flowers thus convene.--
    Come follow me...

    Springtime's approach to which we're heir
    Will bring about winter's repair,
    Where we shall witness sights serene
    And glory in that to be seen.
    No other season can compare.
    Come follow me...

    Copyright © 2004 Dan Tharp <mailto:danth64@yahoo.com>

    Tyburn
    A six line poem consisting of 2, 2, 2, 2, 9, 9 syllables.

    The first four lines rhyme and are all descriptive words. The last two lines rhyme and incorporate
    the first, second, third, and fourth lines as the 5th through 8th syllables.

    Example #1:
    Death

    Blackest
    Darkest
    Coldest
    Oldest
    Burning in the Blackest, Darkest night
    There in lives the Coldest, Oldest fright

    Copyright © 2001 Mike McCann

    Septolet
    The Septolet is a poem consisting of seven lines containing fourteen words with a break in between
    the two parts. Both parts deal with the same thought and create a picture.

    Example #1:
    Untitled

    Lion
    moving swiftly
    across the plain,
    most intent.

    Antelope
    grazing contently
    on his meal.

    Copyright © 2003 Crystal Rose

    Naani
    Naani is one of Indian's most popular Telugu poems. Naani means an expression of one and all.
    It consists of 4 lines, the total lines consists of 20 to 25 syllables. The poem is not bounded to
    a particular subject. Generally it depends upon human relations and current statements. This
    poetry was introduced by one of the renowned Telugu poets Dr. N.Gopi, presently working as
    vice-chancellor to Telugu University, Andhra Pradesh.

    Example #1:
    A dialogue
    When lengthens
    Remain questions
    Without answer as criticism.

    Copyright © 2001 Bollimuntha venkata Ramana Rao

    Quinzaine
    The English word quinzaine come from the French word qunize, meaning fifteen. A quinzaine is
    an unrhymed verse of fifteen syllables.

    These syllables are distributed among three lines so that there are seven syllables in the first line,
    five in the second line and three in the third line (7/5/3). The first line makes a statement. The next
    two lines ask a question relating to that statement.

    Example:
    I'm a very strong woman
    Are you a woman?
    Are you strong?

    Copyright © 2003 Katie Schmidt <mailto:katieschmidt2002@yahoo.com>

    Sestina
    The sestina is a strict ordered form of poetry, dating back to twelfth century French troubadours. It
    consists of six six-line (sestets) stanzas followed by a three-line envoy. Rather than use a rhyme
    scheme, the six ending words of the first stanza are repeated as the ending words of the other five
    stanzas in a set pattern. The envoy uses two of the ending words per line, again in a set pattern.

    First stanza, ..1 ..2 ..3 ..4 ..5 ..6
    Second stanza, ..6 ..1 ..5 .. 2 ..4 ..3
    Third stanza, ..3 ..6 ..4 ..1 ..2 ..5
    Fourth stanza, ..5 ..3 ..2 ..6 ..1 ..4
    Fifth stanza, ..4 ..5 ..1 ..3 ..6 ..2
    Sixth stanza, ..2 ..4 ..6 ..5 ..3 ..1

    Concluding tercet:
    middle of first line ..2, end of first line ..5
    middle of second line ..4, end of second line..3
    middle if third line ..6, end of third line ..1

    Example:
    Sestina, to the lover's rite

    We stand at last upon this eventide, to give
    to each our vow. To the lover's rite abide.
    Let that which does not end return,
    and let no turning days divide us.
    I confess I am afraid of what certain mystery
    a seasonless sun reveals.

    I fear more the solitary life revealed
    in Autumn's long spell. Then let it be this life I give
    without caution. And let the mystery
    rest untouched where sea and land abide.
    My soul recalls no still night felled between us.
    It seems we were born together, and together return

    anew to the whitening day. To the turn
    of the sovereign tide. My hands laid bare reveal
    another light. And hand to my hand we make a country of us,
    my companion of nightlong ways. Let these common lands give
    shape to sleeping wiles. Let the bright and pebbled shore abide
    the rushing sea. "In country sleep" we'll toil our songstilled mystery.

    And will we sing, in furthered seasons, the hearthstone mysteries
    of time's greener passion? Love again our tamer glories? If so return
    to the hallowed spire of youth. In this gentle fate we'll abide,
    for what is our hymn but a child's bedtime refrain? What is revealed
    in mystery but the coming breeze we long to breathe and give
    to the new? Its buried scent a memory which knows us

    again. Then by the sway of winter's solemn flame let us
    firm this vow. Though the prophet moon still steadies her mystery
    before us, our last will be a greener gold, given
    to the one sacrament. And breath by breath return
    again to our certain selves, our nightbound promise revealed.
    Heart of this heart abide.

    Soul of this soul abide.
    We were born together, and together let us
    pass unknown through porticos of the half-light shadow, revealing
    in turn the break of every lasted dawn, and each unsummoned mystery
    inspired on a shifting sea. It is the end days return.
    The proffered gift we give.

    Abide at last, and forever love, the mystery
    of us. Bound by time's lasting measure we'll return,
    revealing with every breath our souls to give.

    Copyright © 2000 Dave Charlon

    Tongue Twister Poem
    A Tongue Twister poem is made up of lines/verses that are hard to say when read aloud
    by using similar consonant sounds in succession (use of alliteration). In other words, the
    poem ties your tongue into knots. This form does not require end or internal rhyme.

    Example #1:
    Vino

    vile vintage vino
    via violent varicose veins
    vagrant vapors vacate
    vast vascular vessels
    vanity vamoose
    while visions of
    voluptuous vixens
    vibrating vigorously
    virtually vaporize
    into a vast vapid vat
    of venomous venules

    Copyright © 2001 Lorraine Nisbet

    Epigram
    Epigrams are short satirical poems ending with either a humorous retort or a stinging punchline.

    Used mainly as expressions of social criticism or political satire, the most common forms are
    written as a couplet: a pair of rhymed lines in the same meter.

    Practioners of this poetic expression include John Dunne, Ben Jonson, William Blake and
    Robert Frost.

    Example:
    Bent and battered, the live oaks have through ages survived
    until developed senses of modern man ripped them up still alive.

    Time rolls out down wide grassy lawns
    yet within these suburbs a dearth of it is spawned.

    Such volunteers are said to advocate
    but to the law, they instead frustrate.

    Copyright © 2001 Lachlan Ivy

    Nonet
    A nonet has nine lines. The first line has nine syllables, the second line eight syllables, the third line
    seven syllables, etc... until line nine that finishes withone syllable. It can be on any subject and
    rhyming is optional.

    line 1 - 9 syllables
    line 2 - 8 syllables
    line 3 - 7 syllables
    line 4 - 6 syllables
    line 5 - 5 syllables
    line 6 - 4 syllables
    line 7 - 3 syllables
    line 8 - 2 syllables
    line 9 - 1 syllable

    Example:
    a pirates playground

    the ocean is a pirate's playground
    they live their lives upon the sea
    battles are fought to the death
    the loot is divided
    they drink to those lost
    set sail again
    a pirate's
    life for
    me

    Copyright © 2003 Mark Williams <mailto>

    Pantoum
    The pantoum consists of a series of quatrains rhyming ABAB in which the second and fourth lines
    of a quatrain recur as the first and third lines in the succeeding quatrain; each quatrain introduces a
    new second rhyme as BCBC, CDCD. The first line of the series recurs as the last line of the closing
    quatrain, and third line of the poem recurs as the second line of the closing quatrain, rhyming ZAZA.

    The design is simple:

    Line 1
    Line 2
    Line 3
    Line 4

    Line 5 (repeat of line 2)
    Line 6
    Line 7 (repeat of line 4)
    Line 8

    Continue with as many stanzas as you wish, but the ending stanzathen repeats the second and
    fourth lines of the previous stanza (as its first and third lines), and also repeats the third line of
    the first stanza, as its second line, and the first line of the first stanza as its fourth. So the first
    line of the poem is also the last.

    Last stanza:

    Line 2 of previous stanza
    Line 3 of first stanza
    Line 4 of previous stanza
    Line 1 of first stanza

    Example #1:
    It All Started With A Packet of Seeds

    It all started with a packet of seeds,
    To be planted with tenderness and care,
    At the base of an Oak, free from all weeds.
    They will produce such beauty and flare.

    To be planted with tenderness and care,
    A cacophony of colorful flowers,
    They will produce such beauty and flare.
    With an aroma that can continue for hours.

    A cacophony of colorful flowers,
    Bright oranges with yellows and reds,
    With an aroma that can continue for hours,
    Delivered from their fresh flower beds.

    Bright oranges with yellows and reds,
    At the base of an oak, free from all weeds,
    Delivered from their fresh flower beds,
    At all started with a packet of seeds.

    Copyright © 2001 Sally Ann Roberts

    To see more examples of the forms, visit:

    www.shadowpoetry.com

    Click on Resources than chose Types of Poetry.

    1st place - 10 r/r/c
    2nd place - 8 r/r/c
    3rd place - 5 r/r/c

    Deadline is January 5th at midnight. Good luck!
    Please no explicit poems or profanity!

  • NyellMoonlight
    16 years ago

    I'm in :) I'll write Nonet

  • Rachel RTVW
    16 years ago

    Yeah, I noticed the shape poems don't appear so I will eliminate that form.

  • Gem
    16 years ago

    I've wrote two shape poems and managed to shape them on here with a little bit of work but whatever, i'll take sestina

  • Rachel RTVW
    16 years ago

    Gem, if you can get them to turn out, you can do the shape form :)

  • Cindy
    16 years ago

    Over The Rainbow

    The wind is blowing through the trees
    Whispering come and follow me
    Where only joy and love abound
    Happy laughter the only sound
    Take my hand and you will see

    Colorful rainbows in the sky
    Birds singing happily as they fly
    A wonderland for you and I
    The wind is blowing

    Hand in hand traveling streets of gold
    Forever your love I will hold
    Turning our faces towards the sun
    Once again we become one
    Our future now has been fortold
    The wind is blowing

    Rondeau
    A Rondeau is a French form, 15 lines long, consisting of three stanzas: a quintet, a quatrain, and a
    sestet with a rhyme scheme as follows: aabba aabR aabbaR. Lines 9 and 15 are short - a
    refrain (R) consisting of a phrase taken from line one. The other lines are longer (but all of the
    same metrical length).

  • Kenny
    16 years ago

    Ok ok, I'll have Nonet

    TITLE: Death Looms
    FORM: Nonet
    BY: SarahDale

    She dwells in distrust and suspicion
    Strolls on a rough and bumpy road
    With no precise volition
    Danger she oversees
    Grim Reaper draws near
    Heightening fear
    Sounds she hear
    Close to
    Death

    Nonet:
    A Nonet has 9 lines, the first has 9 syllables and each following line has 1 less syllable until the last line has only 1 syllable. A rhyming scheme is optional.

  • Kenny
    16 years ago

    Can I have two forms?? just asking

  • NyellMoonlight
    16 years ago

    Tasting the orchids (Nonet)

    by NyellMoonlight

    Essence of orchids seduce senses
    deceiving numbed mind forever
    behind purple, silky curtains
    feeble brushes touch the skin
    travel behind thoughts
    cotton- candy
    sweetness melts
    words of
    love.

  • Kenny
    16 years ago

    I'll take Rondeau also ^^, just want to try this form

  • Kenny
    16 years ago

    TITLE:Dead On Arrival
    FORM: Rondeau
    BY: SarahDale

    As my heart then ripped apart by a sudden change of stare
    Glares revealing reality along the edge of despair
    Confusion heightened, shattered truth I cannot ignore
    His hands entangled with yours, cold tears flow for more
    Raised the pain so deeply, lost in hearts pieces I declare

    Memories that have come to past, you don't bother to care
    Those sweet kisses of love in the dark, finger tips on your hair
    Preceding the altar, pledged to live life together forevermore
    As my heart then ripped apart

    Void road I'll stroll, to the seen reality I'm now aware
    Memories will be buried, will remain forgotten, I swear
    Pictures soon to be scattered and torn along our floor
    Smokescreen of distrust will glide as you open our door
    Leaving promises rotten and broken, suspicion to wear
    As my heart then ripped apart

  • Gem
    16 years ago

    Xx Side By Side, Heart To Heart - Sestina xX

    A beautiful maiden standing beneath the night
    sky. Smiling softly at her one true love.
    The one to which her heart belongs.
    Something precious and true is taking place
    as their eyes meet across the dew speckled foliage. It's time
    to seal forever and always with a kiss.

    So many things can be said with a mere delicate kiss.
    They are silhouetted by the shimmering stars of the night
    that twinkle in unison. Keeping in time
    with the melody of love.
    The enchanting requiem of such a magical place
    where these powerful, wondrous emotions belong.

    It's not difficult to tell these two souls belong
    together as one. You can see the sparks, the devotion, as they kiss,
    feel the passion in the soft breeze, as the exchange takes place.
    In the safe and peaceful haven that the night
    provides. It's the exchange of their love
    that will last until the end of time.

    The maiden smiled, a slow sweet smile, reminding him of the time
    he first saw her face, when he realised his heart belongs
    with hers. That he was made to love
    and cherish her and only her. It was proved to him when a kiss
    was placed on his lips, on the first night
    they spent together. In this same enchanting place.

    One year later, they returned hand in hand, side by side, heart to heart to this place
    where dreams come true. Where they kissed for the first time.
    They exchanged their vows under the deep blue and black night
    sky, stars twinkling above. Two hearts that belong
    together, two souls combined, made official with a sweet kiss,
    symbolising true love.

    Night comes to an end as dawn breaks blessing where love
    belongs, where it was born in such a majestic and beautiful place.
    Time holds no boundaries when a love like this is sealed with a kiss.

    *Gem*
    Copyright©GemmaStott2007

    .................................Oh......................................
    ............................Christmas................................
    ...............................Tree.....................................
    .........................You stand so..............................
    .....................Tall, looking down...........................
    ...................Upon on us all. Pretty.......................
    ......................Colours shine so............................
    .................Bright, sparkling up this.....................
    ..............Dismal night. Glittering baubles.............
    .........Hang here and there. With an angel..........
    ............On top reaching into the air....................
    .........Silver, Purple, Red, Gold and Green............
    ...You're the prettiest tree that I've ever seen....
    ..........................Oh Christ-...................................
    ..........................Mas Tree.....................................
    .....................You stand so tall..............................
    .......................Looking down.................................
    .........................Upon is all....................................

    *Gem*
    Copyright©GemmaStott2007

    I have the two written, if you can only enter one i'm entering the sestina because that is the piece i'm proudest of, lol

  • Rachel RTVW
    16 years ago

    Yes, you can enter more than one form.

    Wow, these are turning out great!

  • Kenny
    16 years ago

    Oh! sorry. . . ok i'll change it. . tnx by the way!

  • Ingrid
    16 years ago

    Let's fly away (Rondeau)

    by Healing Spirit tpfka Broker

    Let's fly away together my sweet love
    To that place we always dreamed of
    Our pain and suffering left in the past
    To rejoice in a love forever to last
    Come be with me, my turtle dove

    So many years spent in agony and pain,
    searching for love and indeed not in vain.
    Be my forever sunshine, my angel of love
    Let's fly away....

    So unexpectedly the sun started shining
    when you walked into my life, smiling..
    You broke through my walls and won me
    Swept me off my feet and made me see
    you truly love me and left my heart singing
    Let's fly away....

    Rondeau
    A Rondeau is a French form, 15 lines long, consisting of three stanzas: a quintet, a quatrain, and a
    sestet with a rhyme scheme as follows: aabba aabR aabbaR. Lines 9 and 15 are short - a
    refrain (R) consisting of a phrase taken from line one. The other lines are longer (but all of the
    same metrical length).