Songs to explain- ends jan 7th 2008

Rules
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1.Has to rhyme
2.one title per person
3.grammar or slang not judged.
4.cant be too short (like 1-3 stanzas)
5. Based on emotion, and wording...
6.pm me with the title you chose
7.ENDS ON jan 15, 2008
(this is my first contest btw)

Prizes
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1st-20 poems r/r/c and added to favs
2nd- 10 poems r/r/c
3rd-5 poems r/r/c

TITLES:
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1.lips of an angel-gem
2.our song-FridusBlueheaven
3.fuck it
4.you were my everything-SarahDale
5.man to man-HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
6.happy ending
7.bother
8.anymore
9.let me love you-ReproducedByIntelligence
9.you remind me
10.you got it bad-ContradictingThoughts
11.someday
12.i swear
13.miss me
14.can i live?
15.shes everything-Lonely Romeo

Can I have our song???

Let Me Love you, Please.

Need more ppl lol.. come on reserve ur titles

Maybe you should postpone the deadline...
So the people have more time to write...

Just IMHO

Can I have "You were my Everything" please and thank you!

Can i have she's everything?

TITLE: You were My Everything
BY: SarahDale

Your tombstone never withered with time, though broken
Grave still not hollow with memories, never forgotten
As my cold tear drops flow, never will be restrained
Newly bought roses stained with love, I lay for you to obtain

Spending the end of time would be painful without you
Do you remember our kisses, hugs and deep stares? I miss them so true
Every time I gaze our pictures together, it hurts every second
Losing an angel I dearly love, where our souls already bond

Those moments along the shoreline, our footsteps printed in the sand
Do you remember our wedding? We pledged to live hand in hand
Then after, down we laid and stared the starry starry night
Oh! I miss them so much honey, even our little and bitter fights

There's no one who'll whisper again those loving and sweet phrase
Those "I Love You" from you, smiling as I touched gently your face
Do you remember our unborn son? He would be lucky with you her mother
Our hopes and dreams for him, as we prayed to live life happily forever

Those memories are still fresh honey, I know you can hear me
Even you left me all alone, here in my heart you will always be
I thought I have all the worlds richest with your love, everything!
But as you walked away from my life, you left me with nothing

Title : Our Song
Written By : Fridus Blueheaven

It's been years that I never see your lovely face
We've separated by sea, we're in a different place
Another winter has gone but it never felt so warm
I keep missing a girl that lately held both my arm

I saw our picture and it's you the one by my side
You're the only one I'm thinking through the night
Without you here, it feels like everything out of sight
My lady, to me you are my precious guiding light

I've been missing you through every single day
My memories keep going to words you used to say
Still remember lovely place where we used to stay
And I'd love to do anything, just to feel that way

Still remember how we struggle to make everything real
We've beaten the selfishness and trying to have a deal
We believed in our love and do everything what we will
Even though we're so far, that's why I will love you still

That was the story about the song that we used to listen
When you're by my side, everything feels like heaven
That's too hard when you're not aside, my heart is broken
It's a lonesome heart deep inside that needs to be opened

When I'm thinking of you, I always play this lovely song
Somehow this song could show me the way to be strong
This is our song, what we listened when we're still young
But forever this song is place where lonely hearts belong

2008 Blueheaven Entertainment (c)

Man to man, please :]

Let Me Love You.

Eyes as bright as the northern star,
lead me home when I'm off too far.
With gifts abundant and treasured souls,
that reach to me from the darkest hole.
Pour out your heart, my darling love.
Scream to me words meant for up above.
I'll send the prayer, to make it easier on you.
Just promise me, you'll let me love you.

Find your way into my arms,
after breakfast and lucky charms.
Turn your life upside down,
to reverse that needless, useless frown.
Bury your secrets deep within mine,
so we can share everything, soon - in time;
I'll tell no lies, to make it easier on you.
Just promise me, you'll let me love you.

Follow your heart and not your mind,
take time to let life slowly rewind -
Playback what you're missing today,
and show the road you're on your way -
Back to the heart of the one you love,
to scream those words meant for up above.
I'll send the prayer, to make it easier on you.
Just promise me, you'll let me love you.

Cherish our life together once it ends,
and hold so tightly to our dearest friends.
Don't let them fool you into believing,
because I've proved my point undeceiving -
The heart I hold up to your face,
is to tell you that it's lost it's place:
[And] It'll tell no lies, to make it easier on you.
Just promise me, you'll let me love you.

I am lettin this go on till

jan 15, 2008

Lips of an angel please

Xx Lips Of An Angel - Ottava Rima xX

Those lips of an angel get me every time
So luscious and soft and so heavenly
They start to move closer until they brush mine
Kissing me softly and so sensually
I start getting tingles up and down my spine
As you lay me down on the pillows gently
You smile and tell me you love me so much
Still driving me crazy with your teasing touch

Those lips of an angel are smiling so sweet
Lulling me into a state of sheer bliss
Whispering sweet words, my heart skips a beat
Feels like I'm falling in a love filled abyss
If this was a tape I'd keep it on repeat
I just want to stay locked in your angel kiss
This whole entire night just feels so surreal
These feelings I have, I just can't conceal

Those lips of an angel now start to explore
I bask in the pleasure your teasing provides
As our clothes fall into a heap on the floor
I love the feeling as our skin collides
Feeling a sensation I've not felt before
It's all because of this love you've supplied
I reach out and trace the smile on your face
I feel so lucky wrapped in your embrace

Those lips of an angel now kiss me with care
And then we begin and it just feels so right
You've shown me that there's no need to be scared
I look deep in your eyes and hold you so tight
Then my body feels like it's floating on air
And I've reached a place where my heart takes flight
We lay close together, bodies intertwined
Those lips of angel get me every time

*Gem*
Copyright©GemmaStott2007

This type of poem is a poem written in 8-line octaves. Each line is of a 10 or 11 syllable count in the following rhyme:
One stanza poem. a, b, a, b, a, b, c, c
Two stanza poem. a, b, a, b, a, b, c, c. d, e, d, e, d, e, f, f
Three stanza poem. a, b, a, b, a, b, c, c. d, e, d, e, d, e, f, f. g, h, g, h, g, h, i, i ... so on and so on

Come on ppl.. i need more poems

Hey everyone, its me once again..

this is my first contest. i dont know what im doin wrong for no1 to want to enter.. plz let me know whts up

If no1 else is goin to submit poems, i think i might close this early

Okay this is now closed and i am goin to pick a winner now.. thanks for entering!!

The Winners Are

ReproducedByIntelligence
ContradictingThoughts
FridusBlueheaven

i will get to the comments within in because my daughter is here right now. she is 16 months so that should explain it lol