Fantasy comp

  • A girl broken until
    16 years ago

    Hey guys.

    Basically this one is for all the fantasy writers out there- choose a aspect of fantasy off the list below.
    Maximum of 8per aspect.
    and 5 poems per person

    ~ fairy
    *Sarahdale - Done-
    *Mythicmoon
    *mOnStEiToS pRiNcEsS

    ~ dragons
    *Sarahdale-Done-
    *Narcissa

    ~vampires
    *Slavetothemusic -Done-
    *Nyellmoonlight - Done-
    *Darkspirit-Done-
    *Firexdancerxgabriella -Done-
    *XxRomancing the darker sidexX -Done-
    *silhouette of something unimagin-Done-

    ~ magic
    *Darkspirit -Done-
    *Narcissa

    ~ wizards and witches
    *Nyellmoonlight - Done-
    *Narcissa
    *silhouette of something unimagin

    ~ gnomes

    ~unicorns
    *Gem
    *Mythicmoon
    *silhouette of something unimagin

    ~Mythical beans (general)

    ~ spells
    *The poison to you soul
    *Nyellmoonlight -Done-
    *Mythicmoon

    ~ dreams
    *Slavetothemusic -done-
    *AblissfulDREAMER-Done-
    *Firexdancerxgabriella-Done-
    *Mythicmoon
    *mOnStRiToS pRiNcEsS
    *Gem
    *silhouette of something unimagin- Done-

    ~ worlds
    *shadowknight -done-

    ~ royal
    *Nyellmoonlight_Done_
    *Darkspirit -Done-

    ~Angels
    *slavetothemusic -done
    *mOnStRiToS pRiNcEsS
    *Gem

    ~Devils
    *slavetothemusic - done
    *Nyellmoonlight -Done-
    *Darkspirtit -Done
    *silhouette of something unimagin

    ~Werewolves
    *Gem-Done-
    *Xxromancing the darker sidexX -Done-
    *silhouette of something unimagin-Done

    ANYOTHER ASPECT IDEAS PLEASE PM ME

    1st - 15 r/r/c
    2nd- 10 r/r/c
    3rd - 5 r/r/c
    4th - 3 r/r/c
    5th - 1 r/r/c

    Rules:

    1- work must incorperate a fantasy aspect.
    2- nothing mean or offensive

    Any questions, please do not hesitate to ask.

    DEADLINE - 9TH MARCH 2008

  • Melpomene
    16 years ago

    Vampires please.

  • Melpomene
    16 years ago

    A Melody Of Thirst

    The melody of Manson wisps though out the air,
    "If I was your vampire" plays upon the atmosphere,
    Trickles down the spine the thirst for lusting blood,
    Puncturing the flesh with a stench of desire rising.
    Her lips of crimson colored gore, upon a paled face.

    "I am no Dracula" she whispers into blood rushing ears,
    "How cliche of you" wiping her only life force away,
    Turning the radio up "Death waits for no one." strikes a cord,
    Humming along with Manson, Again she repeats the song,
    "If I was your vampire" what other song could possibly play?

  • Melpomene
    16 years ago

    Dreams please :)

  • Melpomene
    16 years ago

    Master Of Dreams

    Wisp throughout air, transparency of silhouette dreams,
    For your only fear shall be entwined within inner webs,
    Follow the melody of a thousand sirens haunted screams,
    Stumble, if you dare, as you'll be fixed to where it gleams,
    Though beware, If captured one will be bounded for eternity.

    Purple butterfly's they prance, within the feathers of illusion,
    Do not be fooled, as they also want you captive in the eye,
    Plant seeds into the thoughts of the mind playing delusion,
    Attack ones sweet sanity, as they sleep in such confusion,
    Yet watch for dream catchers for they don't want you alive.

    Follow my orders without question, For nothing is what it seems,
    As I conduct my transparent army, For I am the master of dreams.

  • Melpomene
    16 years ago

    This is kind of combined with angel and devil though I think it would be better suited under angel.

    Angelic Furry

    Light a rose on fire as the petals fall to the ground,
    Withering away to a crisp in an oven of such flames.
    Brush away the ashes, a smoke essence fills the air,
    Traveling to her fiery lips, dabbled in velvet flames..

    "You belong to me" burns into the parchment of gold,
    Fogging such sweet visions swept away into a cloud,
    A halo painted scarlet, emblem colored in her eyes,
    Extinguishers disabled, Immortality holds this blaze.

    Grace no longer calling for she dived into molten rock,
    Angelic furry captured within the lava of forbidden love,
    A wooden heart carved only embraced by his embers,
    For an angel fell from heaven, in love with the devils son.

  • shadowknight
    16 years ago

    Worlds please

  • Melpomene
    16 years ago

    This is also combined from angels and devils. Though I'll put it under devils. :) Thanks heaps.

    Wings Laced With Bullets

    Wings laced with bullets now drenched with blood,
    Please forgive them lord for their souls have flood,
    Once bright blue eyes placed upon sweetest face,
    Though they will not hold you in comforting embrace
    Do not look upon them with such looks of disgrace,
    Forgive them lord for they have fallen from grace.

    Blazed within fire though hearts drenched with ice,
    Surrounded by danger for the sweet lust of entice,
    Tattered and torn from breathing flames of toxic air,
    Forbidden love for saintan will the world declare,
    As the saints of gods kingdom say a quiet prayer,
    Demonic and angelic combine in deathly affair.

    Wings became laced with bullets drenched with blood,
    Please forgive them lord for there souls did flood,
    Once bright blue eyes placed upon sweetest face,
    Though they will never again hold comforting embrace
    So now we look upon them with a look of disgrace,
    As the lord can not forgive them for falling from grace.

  • shadowknight
    16 years ago

    Hey

    this is called: the time when the world slips away

    Slowly the night folded its dark blanket across the world,
    the sun hid away under the mountains and seas,
    the flowers wrap themselves up,
    the birds fly to a tree and settle down to rest.

    A flock of girls glide around the skies,
    dancing into the dark blue night,
    their partners soon follow,
    a crowd of men,
    lost in wonder of the twirls and curls of the night.

    Slowly the moon rises sending down an eerie glow,
    Onlookers smile and cry tears of pure joy,
    Warmed by the moons cool glow,
    Holding hand in hand,
    the stars take a bow.

    The night soon swallows the thoughts of day,
    Slowly forgetting the light of yesterday,
    the moon begins to set,
    as the suns slumber is coming to an end,
    the west greet their loyal friend,
    worn and torn from the nights song.

    The sun slowly rises from beneath the sea and mountains,
    the birds begin to sing to the morning due,
    The flowers open and spread their colorful glow,
    the dancers return to the world,
    the homes they belong,
    until the night rises,
    they slumber under the sun.

  • NyellMoonlight
    16 years ago

    Pull Strings for the Martyr in You

    by NyellMoonlight

    Tinted heart pump cyan blood defined by broken shadows,
    perfect proportions advertise through hallucinations-
    She sees three-dimensional expressions of success
    in her own crystal ball that mirrored in the blue eyes.

    Sculptures embedded into cold marble whisper secrets,
    family history tales based on cursed treasures-
    She pulls the strings for the martyr in you
    so, like a marionette, you follow her bleak thoughts.

    Adumbrations of movements dance within indigo gaze
    which compel your unreal, sublime expectations-
    She chains the beasts to her metallic throne,
    plays with their confessions on the brink of the night.

    Owning your pitiful existence has never been so undeniable
    over see-reefs that hide her beloved castle-
    She makes love to the ocean, flirts with sapphire moon,
    pulling strings for the Martyr in you, inhaling dark vibrations.

    Category:Spells

  • NyellMoonlight
    16 years ago

    Satanic bride

    by NyellMoonlight

    Evanescent obscurity and shadowed passion inside
    amongst timid sighs hand in hand with Devils bride
    severe thoughts frigidly crystallize gashes
    with medley of harmoniously broken stars.

    Veiled with scarlet velvet, singing decease's choir,
    acrid faceless voices chanting with grotesque awe,
    pale melodies of satanic neon lights exposing
    lambent, frail mesh of Lady Death's wings.

    Cradle of soul's bending over ancient remains
    tip-toeing through graveyards of tainted lust
    cryptic voices decode lifeless riddles
    friable temptations are burning down bloody walls

    Category: Devils

  • NyellMoonlight
    16 years ago

    Forces of night

    by NyellMoonlight

    Gathering the forces of night
    under the skyscrapers,
    casting a shadow against light-
    they're all wearing masks.

    Fearlessly raising their voices
    in the nocturnal inferno,
    adding to the mixture of darkness
    the flames that ignite under their feet.

    The chanting became louder, threatening...
    Captured in it, I shivered
    becoming a part of the haunting choir,
    not myself anymore, the soul trapped in spell.

    Darkened sky was a shrine
    to all of them that night.
    Passionate melody of screams stopped,
    dying before the dawn...

    category: wizards and witches

  • NyellMoonlight
    16 years ago

    Forget regret

    by NyellMoonlight

    Shield me with all twisted moments,
    lets drink blood from the silver chalices
    as all stoned gargoyles ridicule our silhouettes
    over castles of the motionless ancient worlds.

    Forget regret, as the sun sets beyond purple horizon;
    my soul's a temple, filled with your emerald aura.
    Porcelain chambers echo distant screams
    as we run into unknown, guided by descants.

    Hush, my darling, let the silence sing;
    Feel the pulse of this substance like your own,
    embrace little imperfections of darkness,
    let them be your shadow, your other skin.

    Forget regret, captured by antique visions,
    your demonic presence mantles my naked being.
    Earthquake announces cleavage of reality
    as we stand united, gracefully melting in the rain.

    Category: Vampires

  • Kenny
    16 years ago

    Can I have "Dragons"

    Please and Thank you!

  • Blissful
    16 years ago

    Dreams please :]

  • Kenny
    16 years ago

    I'll take also "Fairy". . to keep me busy ^^,

  • Kenny
    16 years ago

    TITLE: Flight Of Dragons
    BY: SarahDale
    CATEGORY: Dragons

    To soar up to the mountains of the heaven's shimmering storm foils
    Our minds like weightless carriages tear through light, lift us beyond
    Where the mirrors part and shadow and fire twist in and out of voids
    And chasms lay open wide the secrets of those once distant apparitions

    To capture the silvery substance trickling from quaking thunderclouds
    Thrilled, stunned and magnetized, wings and lightning; leaping synchronicity
    Sizzling red slickers of flame, sizzling red slickers of our blood
    Up in the glorious heights where these jagged flickers rip into infinity

    To kiss the face of darkness, peering through the haze, damning the fraud
    Of time and reason's fathomless, riddling eventual madness
    Here our spirits' needless burdens are unsaddled and cast back downwards
    Into the bottomless pits of nothingness where our lives were formerly harnessed

    To rise in the tumultous winds that waste the faint throb of human breath
    And feel no dread or care to stoke the strength of those inferior pulses
    Here over and over we throw up and swallow in a multitude of deaths
    And the choice to descend back to the earth shall be to us a choice bethrothed to Remorses

    To feel the throb of the voices of creatures of old existing in everlasting time
    We raise our spirits to grasp the endlessly flowing chorus of life
    They sing one song with a single verse in a single joyous line
    'Praise, praise, praise the Creator of All, for we are staying alive! '

    To be; the purest essence of our flight of reason is 'to be'
    Perfect knowledge of every exploding, divine, electric sense of being
    Overwhelmed high in the forges of thought where creation's dance is free
    Soon we shall embrace the entire universe of life the mountains were concealing.

  • Kenny
    16 years ago

    TITLE: A Fairy Song
    BY: SarahDale
    Category: Fairy

    The moonlight fades from flower and rose
    And the stars dim one by one;
    The tale is told, the song is sung,
    And the Fairy feast is done.
    The night-wind rocks the sleeping flowers,
    And sings to them, soft and low.
    The early birds erelong will wake:
    'T is time for the Elves to go.

    O'er the sleeping earth we silently pass,
    Unseen by mortal eye,
    And send sweet dreams, as we lightly float
    Through the quiet moonlit sky;--
    For the stars' soft eyes alone may see,
    And the flowers alone may know,
    The feasts we hold, the tales we tell;
    So't is time for the Elves to go.

    From bird, and blossom, and bee,
    We learn the lessons they teach;
    And seek, by kindly deeds, to win
    A loving friend in each.
    And though unseen on earth we dwell,
    Sweet voices whisper low,
    And gentle hearts most joyously greet
    The Elves where'er they go.

    When next we meet in the Fairy dell,
    May the silver moon's soft light
    Shine then on faces gay as now,
    And Elfin hearts as light.
    Now spread each wing, for the eastern sky
    With sunlight soon shall glow.
    The morning star shall light us home:
    Farewell! for the Elves must go.

  • Blissful
    16 years ago

    Dreamland
    by AblissfulDREAMER

    It captures me and then slowly lets go
    The place where wishes are endless
    And fairy tales no longer only in books
    Beautiful scenery just breathtaking
    Faith guides and hope never lost

    An enchanting place to escape to
    When reality becomes a pain to endure
    No one judges and happiness is free
    Love is a never-ending emotion
    That completes the soul

    Here is where my heart feels safe
    My treasures hidden from covetous eyes
    No tears shed; no misery suffered
    Where my hearts desires take form
    Protected from the evils of life

    I open my eyes and smile with delight
    The memory of my dreamland lingers

  • Gem
    16 years ago

    Oh oh, please add a section for werewolves and can i also reserve one for the unicorns?

  • Gem
    16 years ago

    Xx Nightside of Eden xX

    The clouds are gathering, marring the moon
    Which glows in full, illuminating the room
    He sits in the corner, clutching onto his chair
    Feeling the bristles of his fast growing hair

    A sharp sudden jolt makes his body jerk
    As the moonlight shines, things go berserk
    He lets out an agonized, blood curdling howl
    That soon transforms into a blood thirsty growl

    The chair is knocked over and broken in two
    With a furious snarl, he smashes it through,
    The window not caring if anyone hears
    The werewolves arrived, it's what everyone fears

    His matted fur is tangled and stained
    With the blood of his victims he's already gained
    Yellow teeth gleam in the misty moonlight
    This time of the month is the werewolves night

    His hungry black eyes darting out of control
    This is the result of selling your soul
    Nobody is safe whilst the moon is still full
    In the night side of Eden, is the human race cull

    *Gem*
    Copyright©GemmaStott2007

    *Cull - When something is killed off

  • NyellMoonlight
    16 years ago

    Nightly Princess

    Empress of breathtaking jewels
    your gown is as bright as the moonlight,
    while it floats above dismal clouds
    entwined with threads of fractured light.

    Oh, nightly princess, ruler of tinted bays,
    my motions follow your drenching heartbeats
    and my loyalty in your shrine lays...
    ... turquoise oaths I engrave into skin.

    Enchanting puppeteer with hands of silky strings
    in front of your gaze the whole world fades,
    as you lurk through the fascinating dreams,
    leaving soles amongst the silver, acrid stars.

    Category: Royal

  • Nix
    16 years ago

    Category: ROYAL

    Black Sails in the Sunset

    by DarkSpirit

    The sea was invoking with it's lulling sounds...
    Sirens are blue messengers
    and their songs tame auras,
    enslaving them to the black sails in the sunset.

    Bleak tears of an ocean queen are
    holes of darkness that absorb lights of the outer world,
    they sail far, on the horizon which became collage
    transforming naive drifters into shifty magicians and pirates.

    You never have enough experience
    to face cursed garrison
    which, over turquoise waves and fervent days
    sail to, in the twilight, crawl back into queen's intestine.

    And again, the ritual's elaborating,
    taking place under diffused, molten fire...
    the skies and immortal sun shiver before comma
    in which constantly fall momentarily captured...

    And the ocean queen wore her sapphire dress,
    more luxuriant than all the rest, on the ball of Gods...
    ... she'll rise the night, give birth to the moon and awake the stars
    when she spills her bleak tears in the sunset.

  • Nix
    16 years ago

    Category: VAMPIRES

    Winged Hunters

    by DarkSpirit

    They flied, deathly-
    black- winged silhouettes, executers of darkness,
    leaving their bloody traces-
    highlighting crimson beauty of the sky.

    Soul- thieves cry above the abyss
    so powerless, motionlessly they stare
    in the game of survival-
    winged hunters seduced their victims.

    The Duke- Malediction- reaches for the knife
    and pulls it from the dream's substance,
    now he can join the audience
    while they watch collided thirst and blades.

    Hunters demand vengeance,
    prey falls into the night's embrace;
    invincibly divine, they rupture necks-
    that's what their red quest is about.

  • Nix
    16 years ago

    Category: DEVILS

    Lucifer's song

    by DarkSpirit

    Seductive melody is invoking, calling out for dance
    bloody moon's the ruler of the night.
    Stars cherish, like reminders on darkened scars
    left to testify above the horrid minds.

    Sanguinary angels forgotten, now they fade
    the demons are whispering chaotic prayers,
    darkened flames of the emotions cremate every thought
    as entwined liquid stars sing Lucifer's song.

    Fallen Gods lustfully raging afore Creators dagger
    the symbol of Lucifer's victory, the descant of blackness;
    broken Sun slowly dieing while eternity bleeds
    the dreams of lost shouts on the world are descend.

  • Nix
    16 years ago

    Category: MAGIC

    Silver Story
    by DarkSpirit

    ...Lost in gaze, again
    her silver eyes
    absorbed my soul,
    irreversibly and invincibly
    implacably, forever
    lost...

    I walked on platinum carpet
    to the door made of pure silver,
    the pupil- shaped key- hole
    matched only to my eye.
    The magic of the chamber was unlocked.

    The walls were painted with marvel sights
    silver dragons collided with the nymphs in same color,
    and the floor was built with silver, too
    and the chalice in which I had to spill my blood
    after drinking the silver liquid from it.

    The knife that I raised was silver,
    reading silver lines from the silver book
    I preformed silver rite to the silver Goddess
    and the silver blood was spilled
    and I knew- It should be red.

    Exchanging skins-
    the moment in which I breathed.
    The fear combined with desperation;
    her broken eyes absorbed my soul,
    implacably, forever- back to the chamber...
    ... lost.

    The walls were painted with marvel sights
    broken dragons collided with the nymphs in same color,
    and the floor was shattered,
    and the chalice in which I had to spill my blood
    after drinking the molten liquid from it.

    I drank, from the carpet,
    my own silver blood.

  • firexdancer
    16 years ago

    Vampires

    Title: Moonlight's Whispers

    My pale skin soaking in the rays of it's pure light
    Only it's music reaching my ears in this dark night
    Over me and under me, it's sound sinking within
    Not a sound I make as I bare my teeth and grin.
    Loving every heartbeat in this godforsaken world
    Ignorance is bliss for some, my body slowly uncurls
    Gasping for the luscious taste of red, like a lioness I run
    Hate spilling out from inside me for those born into the sun.
    Torn between humanity and this animal I've become
    Slithering, like a million snakes, my pack waiting for some fun.

    Watching, we stand silently, waiting for our cue
    Hisses from black mouths, impatient for what's due
    I smile at the others, for my blank eyes see it's here
    Sickening almost, for the moon, our silent cheer.
    Predators, creep invisibly, as we crawl into their homes
    Eating to our comfort, pleasure taken from their moans
    Reaching deeper, deeper, into the lifestream of our kill
    Slinking, like a million snakes, not one drop our tongues do spill.

  • firexdancer
    16 years ago

    Dreams

    Title: Paintful Dreaming

    I know a dream is nothing but an image,
    my image of what the world could be,
    would be, maybe.
    But to me, a dream is nothing but a memory,
    of a future, that once was painted,
    a prophecy, now tainted.

    Yet every night i still dream my dream,
    maybe a dolphin, a bird, a song,
    because somehow i remember that to fly isn't wrong.
    And every night they tempt me so,
    paintbrushes dipped in the waves,
    if only people would know, the life each color saves.

    Sometimes i imagine i have wings,
    pure black in the brightness of night,
    then i forget how the pain hurts, and everything feels allright.
    But sometimes i dream that they're chasing me,
    i can only run so far,
    and then i remember that it never works, when you wish upon a star.

    And sometimes i see unicorns,
    mermaids, wild and free,
    and once again i wish i could swim forever in the sea.
    Still, time must move on, we cannot sleep forever,
    but when i wake up in my bed i cry,
    for i do not want to say goodbye.

    Once upon a time there was a girl,
    who dreamed that she could smile,
    maybe i will dream that dream, if i only wait awhile.
    Maybe a dream of happiness is wishful thinking,
    but as the washed up sea foam is streaming,
    maybe it's just paintful dreaming.

  • Landi Cordier
    16 years ago

    I'd like 2 reserve 3 spots plz, dragons, magic and wizards/witches

  • Romancing the Darker Side
    16 years ago

    Werewolves please

  • Romancing the Darker Side
    16 years ago

    Moonlight's Embrace

    You've felt the sweet moonlight
    Trickle on past your scars
    Falling through the landscape
    Reaching from the stars

    You've felt the change in the mind
    And you were destined to kill
    Rage boiled up inside you
    And to this day it will

    The nightside of the city
    There are no more flashing lights
    Just victims and food
    Hidden in summer nights

    You've felt the wind at your back
    Urging you faster
    Whispering comments
    But you're your own master

    You know you've questioned
    If the way you felt is true
    But see the truth in me, honey,
    I've been there too

  • SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA
    16 years ago

    Can I please have:

    *Fairy
    *Dreams
    *Angels

    Please? Thanks!

    .:CiNdY:.

  • Romancing the Darker Side
    16 years ago

    I'd like Vampires too, please.

  • Romancing the Darker Side
    16 years ago

    Immortal Quest

    Feel the sweet blood dripping
    Tonight it's me vs. your neck
    Into your flesh I'm ripping
    You're a shaking nervous wreck

    Emerging from the grave
    The one kept in your mind
    Now, you've gotta be brave
    Let my shiny fangs unwind

    I pierce into your skin once more
    Immortality has sealed it's door

  • Gem
    16 years ago

    Can i take dreams and angels too please

  • silhouette fairy
    16 years ago

    May i reserve
    vampires
    wizards and witches
    unicorns
    dreams
    and
    werewolves

    please and thank you
    <3s

  • A girl broken until
    16 years ago

    This comp ends soon so please get entries in.
    If you fail to do so there are no late entries accepted.

    Thank you

  • silhouette fairy
    16 years ago

    Abstract Boulevard

    by Silhouette of something unimaginable

    Running down this wild track
    twisting, turning, up and down
    not know how to get out
    i stop.
    looking about me
    surrounded by light
    feeling no warmth
    falling from the sky
    like ash from a fire
    the touch, cold.
    again i move
    not know the way
    following the petals
    where they lead,
    i will never know
    trusting instinct i turn
    leaving the path
    through the trees
    walking across roots
    they reach out
    like little hands
    grasping nothing
    but then inward they turn
    the end very low
    i follow deep underground
    slowly things go dark
    then bright again
    and now in a meadow
    touching the wild grasses
    i reach out
    like the roots once did
    then sitting i wait
    waiting for you to come
    and come you must
    for you wished it so.

    that's my dream one...trying to work on the others..

  • silhouette fairy
    16 years ago

    Simply insane

    by Silhouette fairy

    Glinting in the moonlight
    the man raises it
    slowly breaking the skin
    he takes the victim's life
    then tossing the knife aside
    he walks away
    blood smeared across his face,
    with a bellowing sound he laughs into the night
    the glimmering of the moon shines
    it is full tonight
    he won't need the knife now
    slowly pain consumes his mind
    and he pulls at his clothing
    arching his back he screams
    it slowly changes to a howl
    now he stands on all fours weeping
    then with a snarl takes off for the forest
    creeping up on couples he devours them
    only to feel heart broken afterward
    slowly the night passes
    and now he must change back
    slowly the pain comes again
    he howls into the night
    then slowly it changes to a cry for help
    no he is captured and confused
    questions fly by
    not know what to do he tells his story
    as the inquiring men listen they give him strange looks
    then he ends and the men walk out the door
    "do you believe him?"
    "no he is simply insane"

    there is the werewolf one

  • silhouette fairy
    16 years ago

    Uncertaintiesby Silhouette fairy

    Laying on the ground,
    she stares up at him.
    His skin so pale,
    his eyes like perfect gems.
    Slowly she opens her mouth to speak,
    but he knows what she wants
    and he silences her with a simple gesture.
    Removing his finger from her lips,
    he trails it down her jaw bone
    back to her ear,
    and ever so slowly down her neck.
    Her gentle pulse now quickens.
    Slowly he goes down her side,
    touching every rib down to her hips.
    Now drawing the lines of her thighs,
    he pulls her closer.
    Her steady breath is not so calm
    and the blood races through her veins.
    His face moves closer to her neck,
    his breath ice cold.
    Nervous, she tries to pull away,
    but his iron arms stronger than most hold her still.
    Her eyes widen as he smiles,
    unsheathing his weapons.
    She tries to scream,
    but the noise is cut off with a gurgle,
    as the blood pours into her throat.
    Slowly, he takes her blood
    leaving very little behind.
    she lays there dying
    only to be found
    with the rising sun.

    vampire one
    :D