Fantasy comp

  • Polaroid
    16 years ago

    Well, I was going to enter, but the contest ends today, if you expand the deadline please PM me, then I'll definatley enter a couple

    polaroid

  • Gem
    16 years ago

    Xx Butterfly Kisses xX - DREAMS

    Pink candy canes and butterfly kisses
    Close your eyes darling, fulfill all your wishes
    Slide down the rainbow into a sea of gold
    To a magical place where you never grow old

    Keep a tight hold of your dear teddy bear
    Watch as the mermaids comb their shining hair
    They'll sing you a song with voices so sweet
    Listening to them is such a lovely treat

    Chocolate drops fall from a Vanilla sky
    Pixies and fairies are all flying high
    Scattering pixie dust over your head
    This is better than any fairytale you've read

    The glitter carousel is waiting to start
    Shimmering unicorns beg you to take part
    The organ strikes up a tinkling tune
    About a little cow who jumped over the moon

    Pink candy floss cloads float lazily past
    Time in this dreamworld flies by way too fast
    A cute little elf reaches for your hand
    Ring around the roses then fall on the sand

    Butterfly kisses and cold lemonade
    An enchanted dreamworld that your mind has made
    So go to sleep sweetheart, close your tired eyes
    Spend all your sweet dreams with magic butterflies

    *Gem*
    Copyright©GemmaStott2008

    Xx Lips Of An Angel - Ottava Rima xX - ANGELS

    Those lips of an angel get me every time
    So luscious and soft and so heavenly
    They start to move closer until they brush mine
    Kissing me softly and so sensually
    I start getting tingles up and down my spine
    As you lay me down on the pillows gently
    You smile and tell me you love me so much
    Still driving me crazy with your teasing touch

    Those lips of an angel are smiling so sweet
    Lulling me into a state of sheer bliss
    Whispering sweet words, my heart skips a beat
    Feels like I'm falling in a love filled abyss
    If this was a tape I'd keep it on repeat
    I just want to stay locked in your angel kiss
    This whole entire night just feels so surreal
    These feelings I have, I just can't conceal

    Those lips of an angel now start to explore
    I bask in the pleasure your teasing provides
    As our clothes fall into a heap on the floor
    I love the feeling as our skin collides
    Feeling a sensation I've not felt before
    It's all because of this love you've supplied
    I reach out and trace the smile on your face
    I feel so lucky wrapped in your embrace

    Those lips of an angel now kiss me with care
    And then we begin and it just feels so right
    You've shown me that there's no need to be scared
    I look deep in your eyes and hold you so tight
    Then my body feels like it's floating on air
    And I've reached a place where my heart takes flight
    We lay close together, bodies intertwined
    Those lips of angel get me every time

    *Gem*
    Copyright©GemmaStott2008

    This type of poem is a poem written in 8-line octaves. Each line is of a 10 or 11 syllable count in the following rhyme:
    One stanza poem. a, b, a, b, a, b, c, c
    Two stanza poem. a, b, a, b, a, b, c, c. d, e, d, e, d, e, f, f
    Three stanza poem. a, b, a, b, a, b, c, c. d, e, d, e, d, e, f, f. g, h, g, h, g, h, i, i ... so on and so on

  • Gem
    16 years ago

    I'll add one for fairies too

    Xx Fairy World xX

    In this universe there are two worlds
    They exist peacefully side by side
    On one side is the world of mortal men
    Whilst the other is where the fairies hide

    A thin veiled curtain separates the two
    A veil of gossamer, misty and light
    It may be drawn back, softly, gently
    Revealing the fairy world of sprites

    Fairies can be seen where flowers bloom
    And where a tree embraces the skies
    Where rivers make a path to the ocean
    And whenever a small child sighs

    It's at these places where the curtains thin
    Where fairies are most readily seen
    Leaving behind a blanket of fairy dust
    A shimmering trail of where they've been

    Those that are lucky to catch a glimpse
    Are touched by magic and freed from pain
    They've opened their eyes, minds and hearts
    And their lives will never be quite the same

    The fair stories are as timeless as the sky
    Infinite as the stars, no beginning or end
    A crystal cascade of days that flow endlessly
    It's down to you if it's real or pretend

    For the fairy world is always there
    With a heart that's honest, open and true
    You only have to open your eyes
    It's waiting to be discovered by you

    *Gem*
    Copyright©GemmaStott2008

  • Polaroid
    16 years ago

    I'll take worlds and dreams please

  • Polaroid
    16 years ago

    Worlds

    Rolling Irish hills,
    with Forest air in my lungs.
    Far away mountains,
    snow capped and frigid

    Beautiful blue sky
    Spotted with fluffy white clouds
    Shaped in whatever
    our imaginations create.

    Green grass so lovely,
    to sit upon with your love
    To gaze upon the night sky
    Hand in hand

    Valleys so deep and secret
    To wander among
    To see small villages nestled
    amid them, homes and families

    My perfect world
    with everything lovely
    But no, of course
    Nothing like this is real

    All these worlds will
    never exist, unless
    we believe upon which
    wil make us content.

    But as I look into the dismal Grey sky,
    and the hard stone pavement
    The night sky holds nothing
    and I see the truth.

    The valleys filled with nothing but sorrow
    And the clouds bring only rain
    Dreams are meant for dreaming
    And nothing gold can stay.

    polaroid

  • A girl broken until
    16 years ago

    So Sorry this is taking so long guys.... Fretful home life.... mhmhmh
    The results of this comp will be posted by next month!!
    Sorry guys havnt had any time.... stupid work and school and clubs and sleep.....

    So sorry
    thanks
    xoxoxox

  • Lemma
    16 years ago

    Hey, if I can still enter I'd like to do one about angels. I'll leave it here now but if it's too late you can just ignore it =) Em xXx

    Fallen From Grace

    She slithers across the grimy earth,
    This is not where she belongs.
    But now her destiny is to travel the world,
    And sing her cold lonely song.

    Low hollow tones and faint mournful words,
    Flow from her mouth like black tears
    That cascade slowly down her sallow ashen face
    From eyes that brim with her fears.

    This monstrosity of a spectre,
    This ghastly gruesome presence
    Was once a holy angel from up above
    But now has a hostile essence.

    She skulks in the shadows of times gone by
    Bitter from her fall from grace.
    White robe now crimson with the blood of her victims
    Halo cannot be replaced.

    She no longer guards heaven's white gates
    But guards the gate to her past
    Longing to forget how far she has fallen
    So far that she is outcast.

    No longer atop her fluffy white cloud
    But dragging herself through the mire
    No longer is she a hallowed guardian
    Or something to which we aspire.

    But a vile malevolent phantom
    From whom all should back away
    Wishing for her sins to be forgiven, redeemed
    Alas here on the Earth she will stay.

  • A girl broken until
    16 years ago

    Hey Guys!!

    Sorry this has taken so long- Hectic month!!!

    I have read all the poems and would like to congradulate everyone one a wonderful effort!!!
    It was a really great to see all of these poems next to each other..

    i will stop yakking for a moment and reveal the results

    1st - 15 r/r/c won by
    Gem with XxNightside of Eden xX

    2nd- 10 r/r/c won by
    Darkspirit with Lucifers song

    3rd - 5 r/r/c won by
    Silhouette fairy with uncertainties

    4th - 3 r/r/c won by
    Slave to the music with master of dreams

    5th - 1 r/r/c won by
    Firexdancerxgabriella with painful dreaming

    Thanks to everyone who entered!
    Hope to read and love your work again soon!!

  • Gem
    16 years ago

    Thankyou so so much =)

  • silhouette fairy
    16 years ago

    WOW... Thanks

  • Melpomene
    16 years ago

    Thankyou very much. Really appreciated.