Honest Criticism at your request.....

anyone who wishes an honest comment on their poem, reply this post...

I mean, don't you hate it when people just type a few words in the comment box, something like...

"hey, good poem. check out mine"

you can't even TELL if they really even read the entire thing!

if anyone wishes for honest critique, please post below... I will do my best to be encouraging and honest at the same time.

I would be really grateful if you could look at some of mine. Like you say, alot of people don't really give an opinion :) Any of my latest ones would be great! Thank you.

ok I will :)

Hey I was just wondering if you could check out my poem "Missing You" and tell me what you think because someone gave it a 1 and I know Im not the greatest poet but a 1?!? I didnt think it was that crap of a poem lol but I guess some people dont appreciate when you poor out your emotions into a poem...

sure...

don't worry about ratings.. I never rate below a 3.. I just not vote and read something better...

but ratings mean nothing.

yeah.. just don't get offended if I don't exactly flatter your work.

"Honest Critiquing" would be nice. I like constructive critisisms, something to strengthen my writing.

Could you please give me some honest, constructive critisism. I get so tired when people just say "Awesome job" or something like that, and the check some of mine out to kkthanksbye because I feel as though they're only trying to "butter me up" so that I will give them a high rating/ praise. Thanks!

okay, I will...

Killer of Time : that would be very much appreciated :)

whew.. if I'm not mistaken I've answered all of your requests... any one else?

I know that I've already requested that you read some of mine, and you critiqued my poem "In the Eye of the Beholder", I took your advice and decided that to make there be more of a connection between the poem and make it easier to understand that I would add a prolouge, I was wondering if you could please look at it and tell me if it added/detracted from the poem or made it easier to follow, thank you so much for your critique!

sure, no problem :)

... but it's getting late over here.. I'll critique it in the morning.. I mean, after school.. school... ughh

I'd appreciate some honest comments if you didn't mind :). I know exactly what you mean when you say it doesn't seem like they've even read it. Thanks!

Tyler

ok

thanks for your comments, diamond!!

ok I think i've covered everybody, now...

Hey if you're still giving critisism, please can you check out my latest poem "opposed reason." I'm happy with everything apart from the ending, the last two lines seems to be peoples favorite just i think theres something missing. I was thinking about maybe repeating the last line, or adding another line that rhymes with the last two on the end, but i'm not sure. What do you think?
Thanks,
Silver

hey could u check out some of mine... thank you

Silver : yeah sure, I'll be happy to, especially since you commented on one of mine :)

I would LOVE (!!!!) honest feed back! I will check out yours, for sure!

I'll get to ALL of you within a day or so... but I gotta go to school in 10 hours... :)