Working on a new novel

Okay yall, im working on a book...and well i have 6 or 7 chapters done so far. would love to hear what some of yall think...but im only looking for real, honest, thoughtfull comments.

if you want to read it just pm me.

*a few things 1st*
1)there is relation to drugs, sex, alchol, self harm, sucide, abuse, and bisexuality...so if any of it bothers you then dont even start reading it

2)i am completly open to new suggestions, so just through some ideas out there.

3)sorry in advance for any typos....

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