Quick anything goes contest

  • Jenni Marie
    16 years ago

    RESULTS AT BOTTOM

  • Moose
    16 years ago

    *sense of feeling that something bad will go down overwhelms*

  • NyellMoonlight
    16 years ago

    Sound Effects and Overdramatics

    by NyellMoonlight

    Efface surface of troublesome blizzards,
    (effects for emotions cause volcanic eruptions)
    volume's beating inside the hive
    while the telegraphs deliver fresh, catastrophic notes.

    oh
    the sun
    is spilling
    dark
    dark
    illusions...
    the world's
    crumbling.

    Excuses build a church of molten lies that echo
    between flashing car crashes inside the mind;
    imagination's infected with deathly shimmers
    so I promise I won't force it this time-

    oh,
    the moon
    is bleeding
    scarlet,
    scarlet
    tears...
    the world's
    sleeping.

  • BrixGoesxRawr
    16 years ago

    Don't Forget You're Mine [You promised me forever]

    by BrixGoesxRawr

    That first kiss; true loves first kiss
    Oh baby, it told me you were the one
    And no -- I'll never let go of you
    Don't forget you're mine [you promised me forever]

    Tightening of the chest, never loved like this
    Baby, don't pour down rain on yourself
    Because you bring the sunshine right into my life
    Don't forget you're mine [you promised me forever]

    I promise I'll give you the best of me
    I'll give you all of me, every part of me
    I won't hold anything back from you
    Don't forget you're mine [you promised me forever]

    Black and white turns to vivid color
    You lift me up, oh so very high
    You're my drug && I'm addicted to your words
    Don't forget your mine [you promised me forever]

    If you ever turned away and walked out that door --
    Weather forecast: Calls for cloudy skies && foggy eyes
    Just hold me in your arms, and we can forget about everything
    Don't forget you're mine [you promised me forever]

    You got me going crazy, I can't put it all in to words
    Take my heart baby -- hold it gently in your hands
    Who needs to sleep? When your dreams have come true.
    Don't forget you're mine [you promised me forever]

    Fact: I need you because I love you
    Just don't forget you're mine

  • Midnight Sun
    16 years ago

    Hold My Hand:

    I wanna tell you a secret
    I'll whisper it in your ear
    Then you can smile with warmth
    And wipe away my salty tears

    Just promise you won't laugh
    When I share this shame
    You know it's importance
    It reflects badly on my name

    So help me through this
    Be my closest friend
    You promised you'd be there
    Until my fateful end

    Make me forget this
    Let me pretend I'm free
    I'm dying soon anyway
    So I need this guaranteed

    Yes my end is so near
    And I want to die standing
    So hold my cold hand
    While this hell I'm withstanding

    ~Midnight Sun

  • Pete
    16 years ago

    Twinkle Twinkle Lots of Stars

    As we gaze at the heavens
    our little slice of the sky
    pearls shining back at us
    so true we cannot deny

    Angelic twinkling diamonds
    fill this beautiful view
    lived so many lifetimes
    still so clear and so new

    Nights crystal studded blanket
    that lays over this world
    glance at a new section
    a new landscape unfurls

    The stars are a lifeline
    for the brave and the bold
    take a look for yourself
    at the beauty they hold

    These gems of the sky
    shining brightly at night
    these heavenly teardrops
    bring us so much delight

    worte that this morning still half asleep... be gentle.

    ~Pete.

  • MyEscape
    16 years ago

    By MyEscape

    Glosa Verse
    Lyrics from Broken by Seether and Amy Lee
    "The worst is over now and we can breathe again
    I wanna hold you high, you steal my pain away
    There's so much left to learn, and no one left to fight
    I wanna hold you high and steal your pain"

    The Road We Are On

    The time for changing things has passed me by
    You know I would from the sorrow in my eyes
    I gave us memories, that I'd rather be erased
    I hope the future gives us better ones in their place.
    For once, this room is slowing down its spin
    I'm feeling so much better than I did then
    Your forgiveness echos deep inside my soul
    And I find it difficult to keep complete control
    It's so hard to keep these feelings deep within
    "The worst is over now and we can breathe again"

    Being understood was one of my biggest fears
    And the reason for this dreamer's fallen tears.
    But the way you understand me, I don't worry.
    And now that I see that, I'm in no hurry.
    I've found a reason, quite a few, for me to stay.
    It took me a while, but I reached that point today.
    You helped me move on from things in my past
    Don't tell me this is too good, or that it won't last.
    I rarely feel so free, so let me feel this way today
    "I wanna hold you high. You steal my pain away."

    A billion questions are racing through my head
    The answers so close, but so far from being said
    Little x's on the calendar make me such a wreck
    But are part of the reason, I keep my words in check.
    And I remind myself the promises aren't held tight
    Nothing can be sworn, or this wouldn't work out right.
    Still, I find an inner hope, maybe I shouldn't have
    But it keeps me going, so I won't give it back.
    I know the time will come, but it's not tonight
    "There's so much left to learn, and no one left to fight"

    If nothing else comes of this, at least we stayed friends
    And I'll take that, though it be a bittersweet end.
    But if I do for you half the things you've done for me
    I feel this could work out so very differently
    We're on a two-way track inside a traveled train
    Ridden by others whose feelings didn't always remain
    And for those who made it, who jumped the track
    Let's learn from them, and make up what we lack.
    I want you to feel the way you made me feel again
    "I wanna hold you high and steal your pain"

  • Gem
    16 years ago

    Xx Nightside of Eden xX

    The clouds are gathering, marring the moon
    Which glows in full, illuminating the room
    He sits in the corner, clutching onto his chair
    Feeling the bristles of his fast growing hair

    A sharp sudden jolt makes his body jerk
    As the moonlight shines, things go berserk
    He lets out an agonized, blood curdling howl
    That soon transforms into a blood thirsty growl

    The chair is knocked over and broken in two
    With a furious snarl, he smashes it through,
    The window not caring if anyone hears
    The werewolves arrived, it's what everyone fears

    His matted fur is tangled and stained
    With the blood of his victims he's already gained
    Yellow teeth gleam in the misty moonlight
    This time of the month is the werewolves night

    His hungry black eyes darting out of control
    This is the result of selling your soul
    Nobody is safe whilst the moon is still full
    In the night side of Eden, is the human race cull

    *Gem*
    Copyright©GemmaStott2007

    *Cull - When something is killed off

  • Nix
    16 years ago

    Wry Patterns on the Skins of Exposed

    by DarkSpirit

    Moon's hover around essence
    reached its maximum
    while the melted, metal hands of spectral dimensions
    flocked over awry path of irony.

    Find me!
    Somewhere between stars shaded with madness,
    smoldering ghost in the fragment of life's links waits.
    I think that the corpse of reality rots inside my darkness.

    Reasoning's crumbled into refecilon
    during our eternal feast.
    With blood I lave, wiping the soul's stains.
    Sight of mine fields is bleared by the odes to Gods.

    Don't you want to get rid of borders
    and pale copulas of illusions?
    ...because the core is irradiated when the crust slithered
    and unexplained frustration's changed with newfound utopia.

  • Jenni Marie
    16 years ago

    Hellon-bleeding crimson rain, 1st place-5 comments along with comment on entered piece. Pete-twinke twinke lots of stars, 2nd place-4 comments along with comment on entered piece. Nyell-sound effects and over dramatics, 3rd place-3 comments along with comment on entered piece. everyone else will get a comment on their entered piece. please pm me the titles you would like doing. xx