Lemme Throw Out Some Titles...

  • homebound
    16 years ago

    ^^ hey sorry i didnt know someone else wrote with that title until now! im so sorry!

  • Baby Rainbow
    16 years ago

    I do this, i love coming up with titles, i sometimes think of the title then write the poem its a good stimulus, love these titles might try it out one time xx

  • NinjaGirl
    16 years ago

    Thanks to PygmyPuff for the title 'skulls and stripes' =]

    ~NinjaGirl~

  • Dark Secrets
    16 years ago

    ^^ I used that title too

  • NinjaGirl
    16 years ago

    Lol i don't feel lonely now ^.^

  • Mello193
    16 years ago

    I like skulls and stripes

  • VYXSIN
    16 years ago

    Oooh thankies.

  • Sourav
    16 years ago

    I'm giving two titles. It'd be good if someone write something about those and post here.

    i) Beyond the sky

    ii) Talking Stars

  • kevin Boundy AKA the ghost
    16 years ago

    Beautiful writing invredible imagery incredible poem all together

  • My Mistakes
    16 years ago

    Beyond the Sky

    beyond the sky is a world so free
    unlike my mind, locked inside me
    beyond the sky you'll find your heart
    but not quite so torn apart

    beyond the clouds is shining sun
    raining down on all the fun
    beyond the clouds is hidding things
    joy to life it brings

    beyond the rainbow is that pot of gold
    forever lost to the world
    beyond the rainbow is hidden pain
    which we all try to contain

    beyond the sky there are so many things
    hidden from view, you will see
    look beyond the sky and you will find
    its the only way to truly be free

  • Silly Shae
    16 years ago

    I guess I will try Skulls and Stripes.

    Heading out tonight
    Hanging with my friends
    Going to the beach party
    It's getting hard to keep up with the trends

    How about the leggings with the skulls and stripes
    Underneath the short red dress
    Or how about just casual
    Its hard not to look like a mess.

    I think the skulls and the stripes
    Really bring out the red
    But I really think casual is better
    When you look at it on my bed

    I will save those Skulls and stripes
    Maybe for a later day
    But until then, I will put them back
    Because the car is about to drive away

    Woah, that was really hard to write. Haha, but anyways, that would be my shot at it.

  • HumanAngel
    16 years ago

    That's a good idea!

    Titles can be a pain to think up - thanks for sharing!

  • Bre Monique
    16 years ago

    Titles are usually the hardest part for me as well. I love the last title <watch me as I watch you>

  • Invited
    16 years ago

    Nice- I like Watch me as I watch you and i think Dust and more Dust is a slightly common title.

  • kevin Boundy AKA the ghost
    16 years ago

    Been gone for awhile but im back ill take errors of a fragile mind

    Errors of a fragile mind
    Make these windows barred
    And yet no one else can see
    How badly my brain is scarred

    Tainted realities
    Form inside my head
    Is it really my fault
    That I wish I was dead?

    Or is it the abuse
    That my soul has sustained
    It seems so impossible
    To keep these nightmares restrained

    Society made me this way
    Sanity is what I left behind
    Now all I have left
    Are errors of a fragile mind

    it came out pretty good (sorry if its too dark)

  • Fantasy
    16 years ago

    I wrote one =D, i used one of nightmarechild's titles. its short, but yeahh ,, lol.

    I could scream my heart out,
    They're not listening anyways,
    But if someone would stop and stare,
    I would laugh until it hurts.

    I don't care,
    i just don't give a damn what you think,
    Just let go,
    And scream your heart out, they're not listening anyways.

    I just want to lose control,
    And forget about everything,
    Just laugh so hard and let go,
    I could just scream, and let it go.

    hope its okay.. tell me what you think =D

  • BREEawNUHH
    16 years ago

    I picked "Social Affair".

    "Social Affair"
    by: Briana Coulter

    I'm stuck in this room,
    full of mysterious strangers.
    I'll keep my mouth shut,
    to keep myself from danger.

    I don't quite understand,
    why I'm feeling all alone.
    There's so many people,
    but my heart sets the tone.

    It tells me to stay silent;
    not to say anything.
    But I just want to scream,
    and not dance or sing.

    Maybe I want to cry,
    and let my feelings out.
    The thing that stops me,
    is my undying doubt.

    **Nothing special. Off the top of my head.**

  • kevin Boundy AKA the ghost
    16 years ago

    P.s 2 people can use the same title
    because two people might have different takes on the title

    so im going to try beyond the sky

    Beyond the sky
    Is where my love resides
    I miss her but I know one day
    We will stand side by side

    I can see her staring at me
    From the skies above
    I confide in the stars
    To send her my love

    Thousands of miles away
    I can still see her face
    Why did she have to leave me
    In this god forsaken place?

    So if I die before I wake
    Without the chance to say goodbye
    Me and my love will be together
    In our heaven beyond the sky

    this literally was written in 15 mins. i lust wanted to write it because i like the title

  • Avrii Monrielle
    16 years ago

    The Vinyl Rain Jacket

    I spent my dollar and thirty-two cents on
    A vinyl rain jacket, purchased by yours truly.

    Rummaged through the bins within
    The nearest thrift store
    Couldn't find the best or worst
    California. Overpriced.

    Stepped with my cheap
    Shoes that no ten-year old should wear.
    Touched the banister
    Of a rickety staircase.

    Held on tight as I ran to the second floor
    Breathing in silk dresses and satin bows.
    Spun around within this treasure chest,
    Hour by hour, I explored.

    I found it! A luxurious gown
    Fit for the princess I wanted to be.
    As I scrambled towards it, I clamored to the floor.
    My pumps ripped a vinyl rain jacket.

    I spent my dollar and thirty-two cents on
    A vinyl rain jacket, purchased by yours truly.

  • kevin Boundy AKA the ghost
    16 years ago

    Ill take the fatal reality of my broken heart

    feel these words
    throbbing in my chest
    please god i beg of you
    dont let this be another test

    it has to be over
    so close and yet so far
    touch my soul
    you can still feel the scars

    before my mind looses control
    so far and yet so close
    i cant keep hoping for your miracle
    cant keep begging for another dose

    i know it seems crazy
    but you're tearing me apart
    this will always be
    the fatal reality of my broken heart

    i really like this one

  • kevin Boundy AKA the ghost
    16 years ago

    Ill take talking stars

    Talking stars, talking stars
    You make my thoughts transcend
    These mysterious words you speak
    I still cannot comprehend

    You whisper to me
    Breathe in this shade
    give in the stillness
    And simply taste the blade

    Feel this silence
    Listen to the silent cry
    But I can't believe my purpose for living
    Is simply to just die

    Talking stars, talking stars
    You don't control my fate
    If you really want me to die
    You're just going to have to wait

    My present makes my future
    Not my past
    This is my closing statement
    Be sure its not my last

    (defintely wasnt my best)

  • kevin Boundy AKA the ghost
    16 years ago

    Ill take another doctor

    Here comes another doctor
    Trying to tell me how I feel
    I see him flinch when he looks me in the eyes
    Because all he sees is steel

    You have a p.h.d
    Hanging on the wall
    Degree from Harvard, magna cum laude
    Yea, I've seen them all

    I'm no child
    This isn't pretend
    Don't get in my head
    Unless you're ready to transcend

    This session is over
    So lets get something straight
    You don't know me so
    Stop talking like you can relate

    it was alright

  • My Mistakes
    16 years ago

    Great job everyone, good flow in here

  • Ixora
    16 years ago

    Skulls and Stripes

    The flag was tattered on the ground
    Protected by dead bodies, blood and tears
    All alive closed their eyes and cheered
    To make the situation better then it appears

    Still none of the survivors smiled,
    They refused to ignore the truth
    As they glared at the battlefield
    Of so many dead in youth

    The war was won but the battle lost
    In their hearts they died as well
    Along the side of their comrades
    Who now were rotting in hell

    Darkness enclosed the soldiers life
    Angered by these governmental types
    No longer do they salute the red, white and blue
    As anything but skulls and stripes.

    -I didn't put too much effort I don't really like writing about war but it's what I thought of when I read the title.

  • kevin Boundy AKA the ghost
    16 years ago

    Well written i thought the same way but i didnt know how to put it but you did very well on this title

  • Ixora
    16 years ago

    Thank you i'm sure it could be better but as i said it's not a particular favorite title of mine.

  • kevin Boundy AKA the ghost
    16 years ago

    Yup understandable a few of these titles didnt turn out to good for me either

  • kevin Boundy AKA the ghost
    16 years ago

    I guess ill try counting hearts

    Any normal person
    Would hate to do what I've done
    I've broken your heart
    And yet I've only just begun

    This is what I do
    All hail the heartbreaker
    I live my life in the fast lane
    Call me a risk taker

    After a life of heartbreak
    And many a broken pledge
    I've been pushed to my limit
    I'm living on the edge

    Payback is so sweet
    All is fare in love and war
    You think I took your heart
    I'm still counting more

  • Ria
    16 years ago

    Hey all!I just decided to participate in the discussion board after 4 years:P Let me try "The sudden stop"

    It's a crazy ride
    It always has been
    And all your hopes run with the wind

    It's a crazy ride yes,it always has been
    But keep in mind all along
    Somewhere there's a sudden stop

    I saw her eyes screaming with words
    I saw her lips forming my reasons
    I longed to touch, I longed to live
    I speeded on rails of hasty dreams
    I gave in to her treason

    It's a crazy slide, it's a lonesome fight
    And she never says goodbye
    She just keeps driving me into her darkest night

    And I enjoy, face to the sky
    I never tried hard to deny
    But when it ends I will move on,
    Cause somewhere there's a sudden stop

  • Michaela T
    16 years ago

    WOW!!! All of you are great!!! lol
    I had fun reading all your poems....
    And all the titles without poems. he he he

  • Blueleo
    16 years ago

    The Porcupine Ball

    Your love is so well protected
    Even when you have rejected
    Nothing I can control anymore
    You are my only love to adore

    Yet you shield yourself from me
    But through your shell I can see
    Your heart does beat for me still
    So through your shell I will drill

    Underneath your spiky comments
    You are soft with loving torments
    Release your love and your heart
    The love between is beautiful art