New Titled Contest

  • Synh
    16 years ago

    Okay, you guys should know how this works by now.

    1. 1 poem per poet
    2. 3 slots per poem title
    4. Any genre you want
    5. No cursing, or rape stories... those tend to suck
    6. No bashing other peoples poems or saying 'they stole my idea' because, seriously, i will kick you out. thats annoying.
    7. Poem must be new

    Okay, now, onto the titles:

    Beautiful Silence (FULL)
    -TheWorldFellNUWerentThere
    -Jade (DONE)

    Toxic Melody (FULL)
    -SlaveToTheMusic (DONE)
    -Hey Brittknee

    Sinful Lullaby
    -NyellMoonlight (DONE)
    -

    Red, Red Rose (FULL)
    -DarkSpirit
    -Jess (DONE)

    Call Of The Wild
    -
    -

    Take My Hand, Love My Soul
    -mOnStRiToS pRiNcEsS (DONE)
    -

    Whisper(s) In The Wind (FULL)
    -AblissfulDREAMER
    -NightmareChild (DONE)

    Twilight River
    -sunsetwithyou (DONE)
    -

    At Midnight (FULL)
    -Beautiful Chaos (DONE)
    -Eric Jackson (DONE)

    Early Snow
    -
    -

    Broken Dreams (FULL)
    -Phirion (DONE)
    -xXxemzxXx (DONE)

    The due date will be February 10th, 2008

  • SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA
    16 years ago

    Can I please have "Take My Hand, Love My Soul" please? Thanks.

    .:CiNdY:.

  • Nix
    16 years ago

    Red, Red Rose
    for me :]

  • NyellMoonlight
    16 years ago

    Sinful Lullaby

    Thanks :)

  • Blissful
    16 years ago

    Whisper in the Wind
    thanks :]

  • Melpomene
    16 years ago

    Toxic Melody
    Thankyou =]

  • Beautiful Chaos
    16 years ago

    At Midnight please

  • Melpomene
    16 years ago

    Toxic Melody

    Drift throughout the atmosphere toxic melody will arise,
    As firefly's flicker entwined with blue beaded butterfly's,
    Stars shall crumble to dust as wind blows through air,
    Casting a light rain over meadows swaying in distance.

    "Kiss me" She whispers grasping his hand within hers,
    As practicals of what once was float from starless night,
    Rose petals travel within breeze, jewels of his affection,
    As silhouettes of a lullaby deteriorate through the mist.

    Droplets evaporate as sunrise forms before glowing eyes,
    "Morning comes round too quick" He hushes to her ear,
    Rainbows become faded within the view of cloudless sky,
    As toxic melody wisps a scent of Daisy's over grass fields.

  • NyellMoonlight
    16 years ago

    Sinful Lullaby

    Cyanide kisses could swirl above the pale skin
    absorbing shattered perfection as it tries to breathe;
    acoustic desires intertwine with dangling unawareness...
    ... headless personas recolor my moonlit world.

    Ornamented rejections nest under the window.
    Inside of diminish, dreamy state I summon visualizations.

    Choke me with tangled butterfly wings
    as senses connect to chosen perceptions.
    Cyanide kisses could bewitch warmed soul,
    caressing damaged heart as it inhales fake infatuations.

    Inside of dreamy state... I summon visualizations.

  • Synh
    16 years ago

    Anyone else?

  • xXxemzxXx
    16 years ago

    Can i plz hav Broken Dreams plz??

  • SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA
    16 years ago

    Take My Hand, Love My Soul

    When I first met you I had these deep feelings,
    I knew that you could be the one.
    I've learned a lesson that love will find you,
    If you just let it in.

    God put us together forever my angel,
    You're my best friend and its to the end.
    I'll do anything for you,
    Just to make your life happy.

    Sometimes I pinch myself to see if I'm dreaming
    Because this love we have is so real.
    When I see you I dont really know
    How you really feel.

    Everytime that we make love,
    It feels like the very first time.
    I've learned a lessonThat love will find you
    Because its so divine and so special

    Baby you're my better half,
    All I needed was you to come into my life.
    I love you more than I've ever loved before you
    I sacrificed so many things.

    I'll go insane if you ever leave
    Right now you're all that I know.
    I feel what you feel, I'll protect you,
    I will never leave you baby.

    .:CiNdY LoPeZ:.
    .:Jan. 28, 2008:.

  • Beautiful Chaos
    16 years ago

    At Midnight

    The sun is sinking,
    Through the sky,
    Colours swirling,
    In reply.

    Drink it in,
    This sinful joy,
    A wild girl,
    A timid boy.

    Lost within,
    This mass confusion,
    Spinning world,
    Of such delusion.

    Love,
    Is all that holds them here,
    Side by side,
    No trace of fear.

    Faith that love,
    Is all they need,
    Bound together,
    Somehow freed.

    Upon the twelve,
    They'll say their vows,
    Live their life,
    As time allows.

    This moment on,
    A brand new start,
    Two souls shall bind,
    One beating heart.

  • xXxemzxXx
    16 years ago

    Broken Dreams...

    Broken dreams
    Lost in her poor soul
    She craves for the ones that cannot be broken
    But her hope continues to fall

    Broken dreams
    She speaks of truth
    The hurt and sadness
    That broken dreams give you

    Broken dreams
    She wishes once more
    That with all her hope
    Her dreams will be broken no more

    Broken dreams
    The dreams that hurt
    She prays to god
    Saying she no longer wants to feel like dirt

    Broken dreams
    Her dreams are simple
    Love, happiness and joy thats all
    Then everything will be blissful

    Broken dreams
    Is all thats in her heart
    But no longer will she have those dreams
    And no longer will that heart of hers be torn apart

  • ephemera
    16 years ago

    Hi, can I have Twilight River?

  • TheWorldFellNUWerentThere
    16 years ago

    Beautiful Silence please.

  • Hey Brittknee
    16 years ago

    Toxic melody please

  • Alexandra Jade Brewer
    16 years ago

    Can I please do Beautiful Silence :)

  • ephemera
    16 years ago

    Twilight River

    Silence is the only barrier between us now
    Quietly come to me sweet maiden of night,
    Your lips so decadent flushed crimson
    Revealed to me in the twilight.

    Echoes of your desire like the breeze
    Seduce the longing I struggle to suppress,
    My thirst wells deep within my throat
    As yours I delicately caress.

    Tonight I shall relive this eternal dream
    As you join me in the nightmare,
    The breath of life, the kiss of death
    From their lives shall flow the river.

  • Alexandra Jade Brewer
    16 years ago

    Beautiful Silence

    Cold concrete stained bright red
    Bruised and pushed against the floor
    Hatred pours from screaming lips
    Begging, pleading "Please no more"

    Pain resonates through her head
    Trying to forget each morbid word
    Your hate filled sentences take control
    She's believing all the convictions that she heard

    A trigger sounds, the noise is deafening
    Her demonic laughter rings through the air
    She watches blood pour from his heart
    Full of all evil she was forced to bare

    Slowly steadily she falls to her knees
    What has she done, shes tries to breathe
    She had hoped this beautiful silence
    Could make all the pain forever leave

  • Synh
    16 years ago

    OMG, IM SO SORRY!

    lol, i havent logged on in like 20 days =P i'll get on it now my bad ha

  • Synh
    16 years ago

    Okay, sorry this took forever but I got all this college crap I gotta fill out so... anyway, WINNERS:

    1st Place, for a total of 10 R/R/C's is.....
    Eric Jackson with At Midnight

    2nd Place, for a total of 7 R/R/C'S is......
    Beautiful Chaos with At Midnight

    3rd Place for a total of 5 R/R/C'S is........
    Jess with Red, Red Rose

    Everyone else recieves 1 comment on the poem they submitted in the contest. Congratulations to the winners. It was pretty hard to decide.

    The winners need to PM me the poems they wish to have read or I won't read them. I'm not coming back to this thread. Also, the winners get their submitted commented on plus the award. So 1st place gets the submitted poem with an additional 10 poems.